Scratch That, part 4

Oct 28, 2009 23:57

Pairing: Pepa & Silvia (LHDP)

Rating: PG for now...

A/N: Thanks to everyone who has commented on this story. I'm trying to update as often as possible but if it takes a few days please bare with me, I have classes to attend to :p I hope you keep reading and enjoying.

Happy reading!

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vickiheartpepsi October 29 2009, 08:44:09 UTC
loooove it!!! really really loving the angst..keep it up!!! and i noe ur busy and u hav a life and all but *gets bak on knees* asap??? :D
thank you:)

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pepsi_ff October 29 2009, 11:33:52 UTC
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and don't worry, I'm working on it ;)

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foot_print_1 October 29 2009, 08:48:23 UTC
This is one heck of a story! Nicely written. Very nice indeed.
You made me a very very happy girl with that fighting scene. It was just so... real, somehow.
Also, I liked the interaction between Pepa and Lola. I wasn’t expecting such a soon change of heart from Pepa, but Lola came and opened her eyes. Yay! Go Lola!

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pepsi_ff October 29 2009, 11:35:02 UTC
Thank you very much :) I'm glad I made you happy ;) I hope Pepa' chnage of heart didn't feel too rushed.

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junebuggy01 October 29 2009, 09:22:37 UTC
First, I hate you, I wanna be hot right now, instead I'm freezing...so not really hate, I guess it's more jealousy?
Um, second, I don't feel THAT bad for Amanda. Lol
Third, I still know something is wrong with me because I thought maybe Pepa would stop Silvia this time and throw her on top of the lab counter... *Sighs*
Fourth, I love Lola and her brilliant advice and the way you wrote the convo between her and Pepa.
Fifth, I love you
Sixth, this is the most disorganized list in the history of lists.
Seventh, Um, poor Rita and her horrible natural excitement. It's very off puttiing to a lot of sad people.
Eight, I'm really rambling now, but I wanna make it to ten.
Ninth, Pepa should have worked harder to keep Silvia in the lab. Reasons: see my third portion of this comment.
Tenth, I made it! Sorry I took up so much space and can't wait til the next chapter!

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pepsi_ff October 29 2009, 11:40:33 UTC
First, don't hate me, it was way too hot, over 30 C degrees and it was hard to even fall asleep! How about we trade some sun for a little bit of clouds and we all get normal temperatures? :D
Seconds, good thing you don't! hehe.
Third, I know, I know... we all want them to just do it, right here, right now! so there's nothing wrong with you ;)
Forth, thank you!
Fifth, awww, you love me? yaya, I love ya too!
Sixth, I've followed your list, so this one must be pretty disorganized too... but we understand it ;)
Seventh, Lol, Rita rules, she's always excited about everything!
Eight, guess I'm making it to ten too!
Nine, you know Silvia's really stubborn, she tried, really, but there was nothing she could do ;)
Ten, I made it too! high five! hehe.

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junebuggy01 October 29 2009, 20:38:45 UTC
First, I'm a dumb American who doesn't exactly know degrees in terms of Celsius... But I will agree with your normal temperature scenario! :D
Second, thank god you think that's a good thing!
Third, Smut them already then! xD JK
Fourth, You're welcome!
Fifth, Yay, I didn't scare you away. :D
Sixth, Thank god we understand what the crap we're saying or this would be pretty pointless.
Seventh, I love Rita and her overexcitement!
Eighth, I have no response.
Ninth, I know, I know, but again, look at my third portion of this comment. xD
Tenth, *High fives and tries to chest bump you* Lol!

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pepsi_ff October 29 2009, 23:00:50 UTC
(I'm warning you already, we could go on like this for ever!)

First, I don't know much about Farenheit either! but according to my very reliable internet source (?), 30 C degrees equals 86 F. Did you send me some clouds? 'cause I didn't get any and it was even hotter than yesterday!... mmm, maybe they are on their way here, huh?
Second, thank god you think it's a good thing I think it's a good thing ;) ("they don't know that we know they know we know"...)
Third, lol... smut? who said anything about smut? nothing dirty in this fanfic!... j/k, don't pass out! :p
Fourth, thanks once again!
Fifth, why would I be scared? *runs away and hides* just kidding!
Sixth, do you understand what we are talking about? 'cause I'm starting to get a little lost! hehe.
Seventh, me too!
Eight, ... ... ... mmm... hi? :D
Ninth, I said no smut!!... and I also said just kidding!
Tenth, lol, *chest bump and falls flat on her butt* told you we could go on forever... :p

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pepsilove64 October 29 2009, 12:35:22 UTC
Hi, sorry for not commenting before
Love your story and thanks for updating often
Maybe now Pepa and Silvia can talk and fix things up
I don't like them not talking
More soon please

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pepsi_ff October 29 2009, 17:48:58 UTC
Thanks! and don't worry, I'm glad to know you've been reading!

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mauvebeads October 29 2009, 14:49:45 UTC
Love it!! Cant wait for the next one.

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pepsi_ff October 29 2009, 17:49:36 UTC
Thank you! next chapter is coming soon.

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