Scratch That, part 3

Oct 26, 2009 00:55

Pairing: Pepa & Silvia (LHDP)

Rating: PG for now...

A/N: Thank you once again to everyone who has left a comment, I love them! hehe, and I hope you keep reading.

I'll stop apologizing for my English, but you've been warned! ;)

Hope you enjoy!

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Pepa was sleeping peacefully until she started to ( Read more... )

lhdp, pepa, silvia, pepsi, scratch that

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qosmio18 October 26 2009, 04:45:30 UTC
Wow seriously I really like this story. Seriously this is like four play. I got all tingly inside.

Can't wait to read the next chapter.

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pepsi_ff October 26 2009, 13:11:31 UTC
I'm glad it did, that's the idea! :D

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baicancook October 26 2009, 05:52:47 UTC
"Leave now, please, before you think I locked you in or something"

-> Excellent angst!! This is fantastic. I like to see them hate each other more before they hook up.

Good job!

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pepsi_ff October 26 2009, 13:13:42 UTC
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it!

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av8rwinn October 26 2009, 06:19:55 UTC
Oh you left me with a weird feeling at the pit of my stomach by ending it so soon. I hope you will have more soon. I know your story is long, but it feels so short. It's good. More soon please.

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pepsi_ff October 26 2009, 13:12:36 UTC
I'm sorry it felt so short! I'll try to post the next one soon to fix it ;)

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vickiheartpepsi October 26 2009, 11:50:08 UTC
I LOVE IT!!..REALLY REALLY!! *gets on knees* more soon...pllllllllz???

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pepsi_ff October 26 2009, 13:13:03 UTC
Thanks! and I'll do my best! :)

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lovelyafterglow October 26 2009, 15:32:25 UTC
I'm sorry I didn't get to comment on your last chapter...but I'm loving this story!

I love angst, so I'm all up on this idea that Pepa's playing it cold and distant to protect herself and Silvia's misinterpreting her behavior, past and present. Ah! I love misundestandings and the drama they create.

More, more, more pleeeeassseee!

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pepsi_ff October 29 2009, 02:57:34 UTC
Thank you! stay tuned for more angst ;)

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