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Theme 83 - Home

Sep 13, 2008 02:13

Title: Return

Author: ZionAngel

Theme: 83 - Home

Rating: PG

Length: 930 words

Summary: “But Jarvis will miss you.”

AN: Let’s just say that it’s not easy to tell if your writing sucks when you’re as tired as I am….
( Day 24 )

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Comments 4

tonpep1 September 13 2008, 09:27:11 UTC

I loved how you had Tony use Jarvis as the reason she needed to stay at his house. Not very subtle of him, but the way Pepper reacted was perfect. I loved the ending with Tony realizing it is not a home without her.

le_red_queen September 13 2008, 11:31:38 UTC

Now I'm sad. :(
Please make Tony happy again?

lady_s September 13 2008, 13:39:04 UTC

Aw, wonderful chapter! I like seeing him start to feel desperate for her. He was just like a little kid in this. I wonder what she makes of it all.

alchemistc September 13 2008, 19:50:44 UTC

I adore your Tony. He's just so perfect, and so believable, going from the strict, respected businessman straight back to the guy who's lonely and uses any excuse necessary to keep someone around even when he knows the other person can see right through them.

And I LOVE the fact that Tony used the "pet misses you" excuse with Jarvis as the pet. Adorable.