Theme 90 - Wreck

Jun 14, 2008 00:17

Title: Crash and Burn and Crash again ( Read more... )

author-minibothan, theme-090wreck, rating-pg/k+

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commodoremarie June 14 2008, 07:11:38 UTC
*contented sigh* I was sad this fic ended. Lovely, comforting stuff. Thank you for writing and sharing! I'm adding this one to my Memories.

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anonymiss731 June 15 2008, 01:58:43 UTC
"that could drop cattle at thirty yards."
"that stubborn bulked mule set to her jaw"
"leaving him standing there sheepishly in his skin suit"
"she powered up the cattle dropping glare"
"various mechanical arms snaking out to remove the suit piece by piece"
"he was some kind of feline, he would have be purring in contentment."
After the mule thing I opened up the comment box early for a game of find the farm animal reference. After I found feline I decided to go back and revise the game to find all the animal references. I added snaking...I don't know if it really counts but eh. But then somewhere around "They were cleaned with the same efficiency and speed that Pepper handled emails and meeting schedules." I got distracted. I stopped playing so who the hell knows if there's more of them. I got about an inch any from the screen and was all absorbed in the ficcage. By the end I forgot I was playing and after the last sentence I went awww that was nice...wait wasn't I doing something...then I saw the comment. ^____^ Great job.

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ancarett June 15 2008, 03:08:56 UTC
This is lovely -- very sweet yet not cloying; lovely dialogue and a great use of the prompt word!

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