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szairmz February 24 2011, 01:55:55 UTC
Woohoo..........scintillating!!!!
“Stick to action.” *nod*
*somersaults across the room*
*take five*
*break into cartwheels*
Beautiful chapter, I'm incoherent now.

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lovelyafterglow February 24 2011, 03:29:50 UTC
Whoo...take a breather there, chica. ;-)I thought this part of the story would go over well. Hopefully I'll get more up soon.

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szairmz March 3 2011, 01:39:18 UTC
I'm dying here.
I miss PepSi damn damn much.
Lately, I've been reading the Spashley fics although I've never watched SON before.
But the emotions I felt are unlike with PepSi.
So, would you be so kind as to help this drowning chica? *on my knees*
I've been to the link and translated the next instalments through google.
But it's not the same as how your words could get to me. (oh, that sound so wrong, no?) *grin*

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lovelyafterglow March 3 2011, 20:05:14 UTC
If you're that hard up for fanfic, I recommend reading some of the Rizzoli & Isles stuff that's out there. The fact that one's a a tall, lanky, brunette cop and the other's a shorter, sorta-blonde/brunette-with-red-highlights ME makes it super easy to just pretend that they're an AU Pepa and Silvia, haha.

And, yeah, stay away from the google translations! I know mine aren't perfect, but gah, computer translations are no way to read a story unless there's absolutely no other option.

p.s. The next update has been posted. :-)

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bsofthewest February 24 2011, 02:59:01 UTC
I just want to die with happiness....This is such a wonderful tale of love and you do it great justice with your translation....although, I would suggest that kids playing guns would say BANG BANG not BOOM BOOM.
I look forward to more, and I know, the angst is not over, but thank you for the love.

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lovelyafterglow February 24 2011, 03:33:00 UTC
THANK YOU! In Spanish, the sound is "pum", and I knew "boom" sounded wrong, but it was just NOT clicking as to what the correct sound would be. "Bang" is...well...bang on! Yay!

Yup, there's still more angst in their future, but at least they've already admitted that they're pretty much meant to be together. :-)

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bsofthewest February 24 2011, 03:38:38 UTC
"admitted that they're pretty much meant to be together" Silly twits...we knew that years ago!

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lovelyafterglow February 24 2011, 03:50:55 UTC
Just a little slow on the uptake, these two, eh?

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sobeit88 February 24 2011, 03:23:11 UTC
Wow! Thanks! Speechless.....

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lovelyafterglow February 24 2011, 03:33:09 UTC
:-D

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pepsi2010 February 24 2011, 04:55:21 UTC
“That we’re hopeless?” She joked.

YES........they HOPELESSLY IN LOVE!!

Thanks for the update....

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lovelyafterglow March 3 2011, 19:48:06 UTC
Welcome! Next one's about to be posted!

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trickydaos February 24 2011, 16:29:16 UTC
Wow, I disappeared for quite sometime, and found out that you're still translating this (excellently, if I may add :D)
Sooo nice that they (well, Silvia...) finally admitting they can't be without one another! Because, hey, face it girls, some people just made for each other ;)

Graahhh....so many stories to catch up!

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lovelyafterglow March 3 2011, 19:49:17 UTC
Haha, yup, I'm still here. And about to post the next part, too, so I hope you're all caught up!

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