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Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski - Chapter 10 (Part 1)

Jun 11, 2010 17:17

Title: Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski
Rating: PG-13

NB: Realizing how much story is still left to translate served as a good kick in the pants. So, here's the start of Chapter 10...more coming next week.

( 10. It's only...sex? (Part 1) )

rating: pg-13, fanfiction: por si éramos pocos, fanfiction

Comments 6

bsofthewest June 11 2010, 22:28:18 UTC

Oh, I am soooo hooked on your words.
"Once she walked into the precinct she transformed into a love-struck idiot who would search out the brunette with her eyes." That's just one perfect part.

lovelyafterglow June 12 2010, 02:51:13 UTC

Ooh...not my words, Belenuski's words! I just translate 'em. ;-)

swiftlyreloaded June 12 2010, 14:57:36 UTC

Aaaahh what a sweet chap =) I see more & more what attracted you to it. Its sweeter becuz of the drama ...once again Lovely THANX!

lovelyafterglow June 13 2010, 19:54:03 UTC

Yes, yes...that's it. After going through the emotional wringer, the lighter, sweeter parts are just that much more satisfying.

And you're welcome!

poetic_daze June 12 2010, 21:44:56 UTC

ooo you've been a busy bee :)
cant wait for the next few chaps... things get quite... interesting ;)

lovelyafterglow June 13 2010, 19:54:47 UTC

Haha, yeah...I had a lot of free time at work...and I'm trying to get to those "interesting" parts for everyone. :-)