Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski - Volume 3, Chapter 9 (Part 1)

Jun 04, 2010 14:11

Title: Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski
Rating: PG-13

NB: And so begins the 3rd Volume...hope y'all enjoy. And comment. Gracias!

9. A New Life (Part 1) )

rating: pg-13, fanfiction: por si éramos pocos, fanfiction

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Comments 15

girlechick June 4 2010, 21:04:28 UTC
I really don't know what to say about this chapter. Yes, there is the negative factor that PepSi have gone their separate ways, but at the same time the love for one another is still there.
I just hope they reconcile soon.

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lovelyafterglow June 6 2010, 00:25:00 UTC
I know...it's sad, but it happens that way sometimes. The love is definitely still there, though...the reconciliation will happen, but I don't know about the "soon" part. :-/

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swiftlyreloaded June 4 2010, 21:28:54 UTC
i tells ya when its meant to be its meant to be PepSi FOREVER!

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lovelyafterglow June 6 2010, 00:25:26 UTC
Ay! And they're definitely meant to be!

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extessie June 4 2010, 23:30:02 UTC
I second BOTH comments! =]

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lovelyafterglow June 6 2010, 00:25:50 UTC
;-)

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pepsifangirl June 5 2010, 02:35:37 UTC
This story's developing nicely. It's well-paced. Looking forward to the next installment!

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lovelyafterglow June 6 2010, 00:26:58 UTC
Oof...don't look too forward to it. I'm sorry to say that the next bit is going to be one of the most difficult parts of the whole story to read...

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bsofthewest June 5 2010, 21:12:14 UTC
The fact that they are not together now JUST MAKES ME SICK! I will patiently wait until you fix them!
I am an unhappy reader.

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lovelyafterglow June 6 2010, 00:28:53 UTC
Ay, chica...I'm sorry. Things are going to get worse before they get better in this story...just know that at least in this version of the story, neither Pepa or Silvia dies...and there is a happy ending, okay? :-)

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bsofthewest June 6 2010, 01:17:33 UTC
I will cling to your words and hope that I am able to see them happy together, before I am too old to see the screen on my 'puter.

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