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PepSi Fanfic - Eggs and Boxes

Apr 05, 2010 22:19

Title: Eggs and Boxes
Pairing: Pepa/Silvia
Rating: PG (as all mine are it would seem)
Description: Part of the series of short stories. Pepa's moved in and I give you just a short glance of how things could be...not quite fine and dandy. :P

N/B Whilst I am aware there is a possibility of a pelting considering how this ends, and considering I will not ( Read more... )

rating: pg, fanfiction

Comments 10

foot_print_1 April 5 2010, 22:52:59 UTC

A Pepsi fic that's not all bubblegum and flowers! Ok, ok, I can live with that! It would be kinda boring if there's never anything wrong with their relationship. They need to have their problems and fights just like other couples do. All relationships have good and bad moments. What's important is that we know they love each other and they’ll end up together.
I mean, we're talking about Pepa and Silvia! That's not a recipe for sweetness and light. lol That'swhat they do. They fight and then have hot reconciliations in the garage.
I just hope you get inspired to write about them making up *winks*

gravity_star April 6 2010, 11:54:43 UTC

Lol I knew someone was gonna ask me for make up sex...but I can't. I'm sorry I just can't. I have written smut in the past, and as much as I enjoy reading I wanted to write these without the smut factor.

On the other hand I have been thinking about it (I did plan just to move onto the next story mwahahaha) and I probably should at least bring Pepa back to the house. Make up would be good...then you lot can let your imaginations go wild ;)

lenageek April 5 2010, 23:28:31 UTC

Can I say that they're gorgeous even when they argue! This was a great fic that showed all their little quirks - I can totally see Silvia putting the eggs just where she wants them to be. ;D

I love these little slice of life pieces that you write that shows Pepa and Silvia's domestic side. One of the reasons I loved this couple from the beginning was because of how realistically they were portrayed - not just with passion and lovey dovey stuff (tho I have a special place in my heart for that) but because they argue, they both are stubborn and opinionated and they don't always get along. They're opposites in so many ways (as the surprise countryside meal Pepa springs on Silvia shows) but they still love each other, in spite of personality differences and quirks that must drive each other crazy!

Thanks! You made my day with this fic!

gravity_star April 6 2010, 11:56:13 UTC

Thank you and you're welcome. They are sooo gorgeous when they argue. The passion that comes through just makes them all the more delectable!

Domestic is what we needed more of. We never got enough!

girlechick April 6 2010, 00:09:47 UTC

I think you should continue with this story. I'm intrigued to where it could end. Maybe something like Silvia sees that she's wrong, chases after Pepa, and possibly have some hot make up sex! ;D
With most of the fanfics you get to read on PepSi, not a lot them show the other side of their relationship; That from time to time they drive each other crazy with their quirks.
Loved this chapter! Can't wait to read more! :D

gravity_star April 6 2010, 11:57:16 UTC

Hot make up sex? Hmmm. I may write the make up...but not the sex. I wanted to stay away from writing the actual sex bits. Just let your own imagination run wild ;)

bsofthewest April 6 2010, 00:33:42 UTC

GodDamnIt....fix this....after what the writers did to our Pepa & Silvia, I need happy sexy fics....PLEASE...MAKE-UP sex...that would be good!

gravity_star April 6 2010, 11:59:15 UTC

Sorry :( I didn't mean to make it a bad enough fic for someone to think of how they left us. Personally I love arguements between couples. Too much lovey dovey stuff makes them seem a little less realistic to me.

I will write another part. But as I told the others...no sex. It will be implied but not written.

bsofthewest April 6 2010, 14:20:22 UTC

I'm sorry, too. I think I came across a tad too vehement. I had intended humor, but when it comes to these 2, I get protective. I look forward to your next part (and I always think of "how they left us", 'cuz it was so wrong.

gravity_star April 6 2010, 14:28:44 UTC

Nah I smiled at your reaction at the same time as feeling a little bad. I can understand the protective...I get that way if people that don't watch or understand the love for them makes a poking comment.

It was so very wrong! But I guess writing about meaningless yet meaningful moments in their history helps me forget. For a while.