Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski - Chapter 7 (Part 3)

Dec 23, 2009 09:23

Title: Por si éramos pocos by Belenuski
Rating: NC-17

NB: Here's part 3...thought I'd get it posted before I leave town for the holidays. There's one more part for this chapter that I'll try to get translated as soon as I get back into town. Happy Holidays, everyone!

7. Simply Happiness (Part 3) )

rating: pg, fanfiction: por si éramos pocos, fanfiction

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trickydaos December 23 2009, 17:19:34 UTC
....this really makes me uncomfortable...
They really never learn, do they? *sigh*
I don't know if it just me, but somehow this Pepa and Silvia are not the way I see them in the series...
humm....(eh, pardon my English). Just my opinion, though.

On another note, babysitting a two-year-old is a real PAIN....*headdesk*

Oh yeah, Happy Holidays!

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lovelyafterglow December 29 2009, 16:32:12 UTC
They'll learn eventually...maybe. :-P

Nothing wrong with that opinion! But, I do want to stress that these characters really aren't the Pepa and Silvia in the series...this is them three years later, married, and with a child. I dunno...things change and people sometimes fall into a routine. :-/ And, no worries about your English...you said it just fine!

I don't know nothin' 'bout babysittin' no two-year olds. Thankfully.

And Happy (soon-to-be) New Year!

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swiftlyreloaded December 23 2009, 20:04:02 UTC
uncomfortable indeed it's like are girls are falling into that we're together cuz "of the kid"
lifestyle. Hmm hope things change.

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lovelyafterglow December 29 2009, 16:34:03 UTC
Yes, yes...change is on the way. Whether it's good change or bad change, I won't give away. But they definitely are letting the "magic" between them slip away... :-(

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junono December 25 2009, 15:47:28 UTC
I'm feeling uncomfortable as well having read this last part... Eeek!

Silvia, oh why can't you just tell Pepa about Aitor!
And stop being a damn hypocrite!
Spend your breaks together in the lab doing the dirty deed like you used to.
Or better yet, the showers! :D

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lovelyafterglow December 29 2009, 16:34:58 UTC
For reals! Why do they waste their time with Aitor and David when they can be having fun in the lab! Silly, silly girls.

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lovelyafterglow December 29 2009, 16:36:59 UTC
Ayyy...a squall's a-brewin'. Both girls were annoying me to no end at this point of the story. And I already full-on hated Aitor and David!

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qosmio18 December 29 2009, 02:31:42 UTC
Uff its been two years boys can't you find other girls to play with. Seriously! Just do what you do best and take off your top and see what happens after. (Oh God, I think I just ate my vomit)

Ok really Silvia and Pepa taking breaks with the person you wife gets all jealous of...really! And then get mad when you find out about it. I mean isn't that the pot calling the kettle black. Sheesh. I would give them both a slap on their fine ass bum but probably would enjoy it myself. :DD

Ok Noah adorable but holy moley what a spunky child. Terrible two's uff it really is a scary thing.

Can't wait to see what unfolds. Get ready for the storm!

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lovelyafterglow December 29 2009, 16:39:53 UTC
The girls on the Spanish forum were asking Belenuski to get Aitor and David together so they could get AWAY from the girls and go do...whatever it is that they do.

Neither one of them has any moral ground here over the other...they're both being retarded.

I love Noah!! She's sooo cute, and yes, spunky. You're seriously gonna fall in love with her as the story progresses...

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