The Dinner

Oct 21, 2010 14:58

Title: The Dinner
Author: peonyinblue 
Rating: G
Word Count: 2,364
Summary: Sequel to "The Dress." The Doctor does fancy. Supposed to be fluffy.

Author's notes: After big_jumps was so nice to me, I couldn't help but add on to this story. This was supposed to be fluffy, although to be honest some angstyness crept in, but I think it is at a very, very low level. You don't ( Read more... )

friendship, fanfic, eleven/amy, the dinner, doctor who

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nicolars October 22 2010, 02:02:26 UTC
This was really lovely, thank you.

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peonyinblue October 23 2010, 01:39:49 UTC
Thank you, very much!

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wuhdemah October 22 2010, 02:49:48 UTC
Oh, I really liked this. <3 I loved all the little details and the tenderness and just the Doctor being generally adorable all strewn in wires and wearing a tuxedo and ahhhh! Love, love, love it. :D

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peonyinblue October 23 2010, 01:41:05 UTC
Aww, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and liked all the little details. I love it when the Doctor gets tangled up in wires :)

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valoscope October 23 2010, 02:41:33 UTC
That was wonderful and beautiful.

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peonyinblue October 24 2010, 16:08:06 UTC
Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it!

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joannacullen October 23 2010, 07:01:39 UTC
Read both of them...absolutely lovely.

This was my favorite line: “That,” he says, waving the sonic at her, “is Time Lordy-ish. Very impressive.” Though there were so many good ones.

You've got such a good handle on their voices and their give-and-take relationship. :) I'd love to read more from you.

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peonyinblue October 24 2010, 16:10:43 UTC
That line always makes me giggle, ever since it came to me... I'm happy you like it too! (Hope its not obnoxious to laugh at my own jokes, haha). And thank you so much for the compliments - I try very hard to write them as authentically as possible, and I'm so glad someone thinks I'm successful!

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varjaks October 23 2010, 16:33:32 UTC
I'd be lying if I said that the ending didn't have me grinning. Wonderful job!

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peonyinblue October 24 2010, 16:11:35 UTC
Oh good! I hoped it would make people smile. Thank you!

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