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Fic - Light the Match

Feb 06, 2012 22:47

Fandom: Fullmetal Alchemist
Pairing/Characters: Roy/Riza
Content Advisory: Sexy business
Words: 1,524
Summary: Roy makes a ~romantic~ gesture. Written for Porn Battle XIII, prompt "roses". aamalie made me do it. Title is from Mirah's "Light the Match".

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relationship: roy/riza, fandom: fullmetal alchemist, type: fic, character: riza hawkeye, character: roy mustang, challenge: porn battle

Comments 17

sailorlibra February 7 2012, 13:09:32 UTC

This was really sweet and lovely.

sixpences February 8 2012, 22:20:30 UTC

Thank you!

missyquill February 7 2012, 18:25:45 UTC

Beautifully done, as always. :)

sixpences February 8 2012, 23:14:22 UTC

Thank you!

kashicat February 7 2012, 22:29:11 UTC

I really love this. So many stories get bogged down in the mechanics of sex, but this one was beautiful.

sixpences February 8 2012, 23:14:59 UTC

Thank you! I always find it much more interesting when stories focus on the emotions involved, so that's what I try to stick to.

elviella March 15 2012, 21:35:44 UTC

More than a month later and I'M STILL NOT OVER HOW PERFECT THIS IS. <3____<3 It's just, a perfect mix of adorable and sexy and funny and considerate (both in the regular meaning and the...other one) and so feelings-y!

(I just LOVE the line about the scars -kldgjlkdjg;lajg;lajdgljddf- and also THEIR JOKES and basically their EVERYTHING.)

(I'm sorry this is so incoherent. Really.)