Blood-red sails: Fantasy or Historical

Dec 09, 2005 14:30

The ship that sailed tonight had blood-red sails, Riva thought. Blood-red sails on the horizon. She shuddered. It was a bad omen. They'd followed the seers and the rotations of the wheel, but they'd still ended up with blood-red as the safest color for the ship. The seer herself had been upset by that, Riva had noticed. She looked out to sea ( Read more... )

historical, fantasy, flash fiction, low potential

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prof_vencire December 9 2005, 23:51:20 UTC
One of the better stories I read had as a main character the man whose job it was to dye the sails for the ships. He falls in love with the daughter of a wealthy man, etc. etc., wealthy man tells him that if he could fill the bay with gold, he could marry the daughter. So he pulls in favors, spends his savings, uses his contacts, and gets every ship's sail dyed gold and one morning they all go out into the bay and he gets to marry the daughter. I liked it. There was a little more, in the way of details that made it work, but I can't recall them all.

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penthius December 10 2005, 00:12:26 UTC
Wow. That's a really pretty fairytale story.

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prof_vencire December 10 2005, 04:34:15 UTC
And it was well-written, too. I was genuinely impressed. Impressed enough to remember it, anyhow. Good stuff.

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prof_vencire December 9 2005, 23:51:46 UTC
Red sky at morn, sailors take warn!
Red sky at night, sailor's delight!

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penthius December 10 2005, 00:12:40 UTC
Yeah, I was kinda thinking of that.

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