Once in Seventy Years - chapter 1

[penthea]

Rating: Mature
Word count: 1400 for this chapter
Pairing: Puck/Kurt, sort of Puck/Rachel
Warnings: Past character death, sort-of-kind-of suicidal thoughts.
Disclaimer: Glee is not mine.
AO3 link, if you prefer

Prologue

Comments

[pterawaters]

My favorite line: He's not going to jump, or anything, but he throws a wadded piece of paper from his pocket over the edge and thinks about what it would be like to want to.

It's so sympathetic and truthful and gives us such an insight into Kurt's state of mind! I'm very much looking forward to more.

(PS. The last two paragraphs could use some line breaks to separate the dialogue and make for easier reading. If the rich text editor isn't working for you, try adding line breaks in the html editor:
after each paragraph to make a new line.)

[penthea]

Thanks for the tip, LJ formatting is not my friend. Will try to fix it!

I'm so glad you liked that part, it's one of those things that I knew made sense to me but I wasn't sure if it would for other people.

[hey_doey_doey]

I love this so much already. :D

[penthea]

Thank you! I actually worried about that part being too much, because Kurt has so many other things in his head at that moment. I'm so happy you liked it.

[wearemagnetised]

This was a first great chapter. I especially love how you've written Kurt.
Can't wait for the next chapter!

[penthea]

Thank you! So glad you like my Kurt :)