Oh, nice! You sold me on a pairing I hadn't even considered before. I can hear Keller's voice while reading, you really have her down. And I liked how you kept true to her POV, that she sees Sheppard rather differently than we're used to.
Thank you. The classic outsider POV is about admiration (or envy) for a pairing/character, but I admit my favorite are the ones about how weird Sheppard looks to other people. :)
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One tiny nitpick is that you have the infirmary as being on the Prometheus; not possible since the Prometheus blew up three years ago.
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Hahaha, yeah, my familiarity with SG-1 is definitely next to nil. Thanks.
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