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pennyante

Chapter 17, "The Sevens"

Mar 17, 2012 20:32

Chapter 17: The Sevens
In the Whole World (WIP)
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5,400
A/N: The first mysteries of Petra-and how Kara fits into it-revealed. It's fun to write Lee when he's figuring out how to play emotional offense. Next chapter should be following soon. (Ugh, I can't believe this one took me so long to post. I need to quit my day job, ( Read more... )

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pennyante March 18 2012, 16:37:41 UTC

Yeah, I haven't put it in any of the comms in at least that long, will do it later today. I love missing updates, too!

apodixis March 18 2012, 02:06:32 UTC

Oh man oh man oh man. This was brilliant! Just the other day I was hoping we got an update soon and here it is. So much was explained to soothe my curiosity, and I'm thoroughly in love with how you've twisted and redone things completely here (as if I hadn't made it obvious before when commenting on the previous chapters). I'm smitten and demanding more.

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pennyante March 18 2012, 16:39:07 UTC

More will come, and more exciting/less expository than this! We should, for example, probably check in with Kara and see how that whole "being holed up with the Tighs on a battlestar in enemy territory" situation is going...

Also, *I* am super smitten with that gif. I bet Marshall would ship pilots.

koolaidmom11 March 18 2012, 03:00:34 UTC

Hey you! I read this and left a comment on ff.net but I love this story!!! I frakking love it!

Also, OMG! how did Kara get back there and Leeee!!!!!!!

pennyante March 18 2012, 16:40:16 UTC

Hey, yourself!

Never fear: All will become clearer. We're going through some fog to get to some light, now. I might post some helpful author's notes 'cause I bet a lot of people are at least a little confused at this juncture.

kdbleu March 18 2012, 04:49:43 UTC

Oh, that is just cleaver and a half. :D What a great twist. I can't wait for more. Although I will.

pennyante March 18 2012, 17:45:23 UTC

Not for long, though, if I can get my ass in gear! :)

bekahmelby March 18 2012, 21:22:34 UTC

My daily check-ins have been rewarded!

It's amazing how such a convoluted story such as Petra makes canon!Kara easier to understand. It's the flashback episode (or season, rather) that would have been SO helpful around the middle of Season 4.

It also semi-explains the Leoben-Kara connection.

pennyante March 19 2012, 01:58:13 UTC

Ha! I was just laughing with my bf the other day about how hilariously convoluted this story is, given that I actually really did start out with the idea that I was going to answer some unresolved mysteries and make canon make sense. It was all supposed to be simple and sensical once I was done... Oops.