Lessons in Epic Storytelling, Ch 13/13

[penny1200]

Title: Lessons in Epic Storytelling
Chapter: 13/13
Pairings: Annie/Abed, Annie/Jeff, side Britta/Troy
Rating: NC-17
Words:  4605
Summary: Annie enters the study room to a scene of even greater chaos than usual.  When the group blames her for their behavior, she sets them down to tell them an epic love story that will reveal every single one of her

Comments

[ext_374301]

a hah! first. (it's the little things)

Good wrap to it all. (though I want to know who the god parents are)

On to your next story! (teaser please)

[penny1200]

Is there really any question on who the godparents would be? Troy, of course, and in my mind that is a parental position Britta would be willing to accept based on the very rare chance of ever needing to actively step in. Plus, there's not a doubt in my mind that those would be the two adults other than Annie and Abed that Sarah would be most familiar with

[ext_374301]

I wasn't sure about Britta (Troy was a given I admit)

Wow that sounds great.

[sassyrogue]

Sad it's over, but a good ending. Abed's worry that infants pretty much only communicate through facial expression was an interesting idea. I hadn't thought of that before.

I'm so glad I got to be here for this story as it unfolded, I really enjoy your writing and I'm excited for your next story, to see how you write the Annie/Abed dynamic in other situations.

Thank you for writing!

[penny1200]

I wanted to approach Abed's parenting in a way that seemed realistic. I can definitely see him worrying about communicating.

I'm happy that you were around and such a frequent reviewer. I definitely hope to see you back with my next story.

You're welcome! I enjoyed it.

[anonymous]

I haven't commented on any of the other chapters, but as I fellow fanfic writer, I know how great reviews are to get. And this story is possibly my favorite of all Community fanfiction stories (partly because it includes my OTPs- Troy/Britta and Annie/Abed) but also because it is SO well written, it is funny and true to the Community-universe (all the characters are PERFECT)...it's just incredible. I've anxiously waited for each installment and I'm definitely going to go back and read the whole thing again, if only to search for the pregnancy clues. Just wanted to say I admire and respect you for writing such a funny, clever, interesting, and realistic story (even though this is Community, which likes to hang slightly off the realism edge, but you know, that's why we love it). I will absolutely read anything you write in the future. And honestly, I could almost see (or hope for) Annie and Abed's relationship to end like this: Abed with his baby and putting down his camera for Annie. Aww.

[penny1200]

Awe! Thank you! This is such a sweet review. And, yeah, reviews are pretty much the lifeblood of my writing. If I don't know if anyone's enjoying it, I lose interest and inspiration quickly. And, really, having my story be someone's possible favorite is such a wonderful compliment.

I'd love to hear from you again on my next story. And, yes, I very much hope that their relationship could end like this.

[fluffyfrolicker]

This is beautiful. I enjoyed Abed's POV and thinking about Sarah and Annie and marriage very much. I LOVE that he's still very much obsessed with TV at the end of the story and you didn't make it as if he had to change somehow to be able to have a good relationship.

I ADORED the Friends references while they decided about the name giving. SPOT ON, definitely :D

everything was beautiful and I can't wait for you to start posting your next story :)

[penny1200]

People seem to have really enjoyed Abed's POV, possibly more than just about anything else in this story based on the reviews I've received, so I wanted to include a small section from it in this final section. Plus, he did narrate the flashback scene that had set the first scene of chapter one in motion, so it seemed right to have him narrate the scene that would provide the readers with an idea about what was to come in their future. And I would never change Abed's obsession with TV or his base personality. He's perfect just the way he is, especially since he's learned empathy.

The Friends references were the only ones that I knew without a doubt that I was going to include in this chapter going in.

I've had to play catch up on my review responses tonight since I had several waiting when I got home from work, but I plan to start working on it once I'm done with that.

[who_locked]

Fantastic ending, i really love this story :)

[penny1200]

Thank you! I'm so happy to hear that you loved it!