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[penelopesque]

crow in a bare tree
that seems right, a bluebird seems
wrong, but there it is

above hawk's eyes hunt,
below our eyes classify
his rusty red tail

Comments

[themagdalen]

I really like that first one.

I mean I like both, but the first one makes me irrationally happy.

A spring introduction

[ms_schnookums]

I'm friends with sp0rk0. Lovely person that she is, she thought I might find sympathetic writerly advice from you. I'm in the middle of writing my thesis for my masters in media studies and I'd love to have your input and support.

[eahawks]

above hawk's eyes hunt