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[penelope_stone]

I'm sitting in work, not feeling the best.  I didn't eat breakfast and when i was brushing my teeth i thought i woud vomit.  Nothing is working.  The sun in shining in the window.

It's a beautiful morning, only i wish i was feeling slightly better so i could appreciate it more.  There is not a cloud in the sky.  The sun is still quite low so it is

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[zarkia]

Not a cloud floats in the sky. The sun, still low, makes long arks across the room. All the dust particles dance in the light, their graceful flow disturbed by passers by. They drift on the wind, illuminated by the light.

There now - active voice is always better.
i'm sorry you're not feeling well. hopefully it will pass soon.

[penelope_stone]

Thanks, it's nice to know i'll always have you to correct my bad english.

Yes i'm feeling better now. Thank you.