The Price of Honor

Apr 24, 2006 19:47

Title: The Price of Honor ( Read more... )

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aliaspiral April 25 2006, 00:12:24 UTC
*makes squeaky noises and flails alot*

CHARLIE! Come back, Charlie! *sobs*

no, seriously, this has occured to me. the level of wrong. i just..generally chose to ignore it and follow my happy blind path.

GAH.

Grow up fast, Gabby! You're KILLING him!

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winkingannie April 25 2006, 00:48:50 UTC
Normally, I'm all about the happy blind path, but the quote about honor struck me. How would a grown man react when he felt himself falling for a seriously underage girl? And then it turned depressing.

Thanks for reviewing!

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inevershutup09 April 25 2006, 00:54:07 UTC
But you write depressing really, really well!

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winkingannie April 25 2006, 00:56:34 UTC
*blushes* Thank you.
I swear, I'm actually a very happy person in real life.

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winkingannie April 25 2006, 00:57:56 UTC
Wow. I'm glad you liked it; I was worried it wouldn't translate well from my head to paper.

I made someone's memories?!?! Score!
Thanks for reviewing!

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literarylemming April 25 2006, 00:57:21 UTC
*THUD*

GUH.

I loved it! I was hoping this challenge would inspire happy, happy fluff, as well as dark and painful angst. You have delivered on the second count with BLAZING colors! THANK YOU!

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winkingannie April 25 2006, 01:03:57 UTC
You loved it! *does a happy dance in the computer chair* WHEE!

I'm glad I could deliver on my first foray into Gabby/Charlie. (Do they have a cute nickname? Garlie? Chabby? Chabrielle?)

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literarylemming April 25 2006, 01:15:40 UTC
You know they don't? They and bill/Fleur have been giving me the WORST time, trying to think of a cute little 'ship name for them!

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katiegsr April 25 2006, 01:57:37 UTC
That was fantastic! dark and not so pretty and sweet *applaudes* loved it :D

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winkingannie April 25 2006, 03:49:29 UTC
I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks!

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fairandbright April 25 2006, 03:40:45 UTC
Oh wow! Loved it! And you said he was going to the special hell! *squee*

It was so dark and angsty and perfect! Loved the last line!

Now I gotta proofread my contribution to this little challenge and post it. *bounces away*

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winkingannie April 25 2006, 03:50:13 UTC
You noticed the special hell! I couldn't resist it.

Yay for more fic from you!

Thanks for reviewing.

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