Naruto :: One Day at a Time :: PG-13 :: Sasuke/Sakura

[pen_x_pistol]

Title: One Day at a Time
Fandom: Naruto
Pairings: Sasuke/Sakura
Rating: PG-13 (suggestive themes)
Genre: Drama, romance
Word count: 528
Spoilers: None
Summary: Sakura's grateful that she managed to finally shatter Sasuke's long-standing mask, but sometimes she's cut by the pieces.

Comments

[water_faerie]

♥ Cute and sad in a roundabout way. The more you think about you just start to feel sorry for the both of them :(

[anat_astarte]

Great fic! Loved the way you characterized them, and the way Sasuke's actions convey so much more than he's willing to say. <3

[la_trombonista]

I like it. I was worried it was going to become non-con, but I'm glad it didn't (not that I don't like non-con; I just prefer a warning for it). Sasuke and Sakura are in character, which is always good.

[sweet_iolanthe]

beautiful,

although at one point the repetition seemed a bit too much at one point, it didn't affect the overall of the shot. very good.
thanks!

[its_game_time]

♥ I normally dislike repetition, TBH, because 9 times out of 10 it comes off lame, bu~t I thought I'd try, anyway.

Glad you liked!

[lalagirl208]

I loved this~ this.. this was wonderful!! <3 (And right now I just scrolled up to see the author, and when I saw your name, I was like, "*faceslap* no wonder it was so great!") I'm putting it on my memories~ ♥

[its_game_time]

X3 TY! Glad you enjoyed it. <3