Tales of the Abyss :: Second Chance at Goodbye :: G :: no pairings

[pen_x_pistol]

Title: Second Chance at Goodbye
Fandom: Tales of the Abyss
Pairings: None?
Rating: G
Genre: General
Word count: 1,581
Spoilers: Yes, up to the end of the game; specifically, Natalia's past.
Prompt: "No name can be read there." -Les Miserables, Victor Hugo
Summary: It was a loss, but at the same time it gave her something she didn't have before. For

Comments

[sagesoren]

That was really nice! It was an interesting topic to tackle, too. I hadn't really thought about what Natalia might have done with the necklace afterward. It kind of makes me wonder about the other significant items the characters carried.

Anyway, very well written, and I liked your depiction of the passing of time. It was very smooth. Your descriptions of feelings in particular are really quite good. I could picture expressions and understand sentiments perfectly.

[its_game_time]

Thanks so much! The whole time-passing thing actually worried me when I was writing it, but I'm glad it came out right.

Glad you liked it. :]