Comments | pen_strokes: Picking Flowers

pen_strokes

Apr 18, 2009 21:52

Title: Picking Flowers
Fandom: Original
Rating: PG
Warnings: none
Summary: We don’t choose our destinies. But what if we could?
Notes: Written for the April week 3 challenge at brigits_flame, theme “flourish”. That sound you hear is me fervently praying that the week 4 theme isn’t “garden”, because if it is, I’m screwed. :P

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( The garden seems to stretch out forever in all directions, flowers and trees of all shapes, sizes, colors, scents, spanning out all around her. )

Comments 25

Aw bethhum April 20 2009, 01:57:05 UTC

This was beautiful. I thought it would end something like that. :) Now I really want to spend time in a garden, under the sun, smelling....

Re: Aw kuhori_rei April 22 2009, 00:06:57 UTC

Hee, thank you lovely!
<3 <3

(lookit me, mixin' up icons! I feel so edgy.)

bluebirds_sing April 20 2009, 07:14:43 UTC

Lovely! :-)

kuhori_rei April 22 2009, 00:07:18 UTC

Thank you!

(p.s. your icon is gorgeous!)

bluebirds_sing April 22 2009, 06:58:08 UTC

Oh yeah… attentionhoard did an amazing job indeed! :-)

cedarwolfsinger April 20 2009, 20:38:26 UTC

This is absolutely beautiful. Wow. To let life be, to let it grow the way it will, not to predict but to let be. Lovely. Good luck with this.

kuhori_rei April 22 2009, 00:07:53 UTC

That's exactly what I was trying to portray! :) Thank you so much!

libra_dragon April 21 2009, 14:39:28 UTC

Very nice, I really enjoyed reading it.

kuhori_rei April 22 2009, 00:08:12 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked!

lacombe April 21 2009, 23:15:51 UTC

::: and exhales :::

Beautiful story! I found myself so caught up with Diana. Wonderful work!

kuhori_rei April 22 2009, 00:08:42 UTC

Hee, Diana kind of grew on me, too, not going to lie!

Thank you so much!