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heaven coming down: part 1

May 27, 2008 15:52

Title: Heaven Coming Down
Author: Aelora and Pen_Of_JenPairings: Anderson Cooper/Dan Abrams ( Read more... )

Comments 6

missstewart May 28 2008, 02:05:53 UTC

Interesting. I really like having two POVs.

(Although... uh... "mother's" and "other's" shouldn't have the apostrophes, IIRC, they're not possessives.)

pen_of_jen May 28 2008, 20:09:50 UTC

thanks for the con crit! =)

quidditchgrrl May 28 2008, 02:58:31 UTC

Very nice intro...I'm intrigued! :)

pen_of_jen May 28 2008, 20:10:54 UTC

thanks...and yay! the next part is up. =)

enamourednhmrd May 28 2008, 04:45:02 UTC

Is excited! I'm a sucker for natural disaster stories.
Not to mention I'm really starting to love Danderson... especially after seeing "After Hours".

pen_of_jen May 28 2008, 20:11:28 UTC

anderdan! ha ha ha ha ha...thanks! there's more posted. =)