ruined

May 01, 2008 13:29

Title: Ruined (sequel to I Won’t Love Him ( Read more... )

chapter story, nc-17, anderson/erica

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alivemagdolene May 1 2008, 19:10:55 UTC
Oh, sweet (however angsty) smut! This is just what I needed right now.

*curls up to reread happily*

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pen_of_jen May 1 2008, 19:36:27 UTC
aw...yay! i got my computer back and found this and 3 other ficlets almost done...so i'm finishing them up and then will be posting them. =D

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nobbins May 1 2008, 21:00:31 UTC
I. love. you.

angsty in all the right places.
perfectly perfect. thanks! :D

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pen_of_jen May 1 2008, 21:47:51 UTC
aw...you're so welcome. there's more anderson/erica smut up too (and other slash fic too...since i know you're starting to like it!)...hope you enjoy! =D

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nobbins May 1 2008, 21:54:46 UTC
youre so right. :]

lol.

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pen_of_jen May 1 2008, 21:58:13 UTC
yay! =D ha ha ha...i knew i'd convert you to my dirty dirty slash ways! mwa ha ha ha ha ha...evil laughter!

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gayalithiel May 1 2008, 23:38:59 UTC
They’d made it through dinner and the first half of the movie before she had cuddled to his side out of impulse and their inhibitions gave way to friendly petting and earnest giggles. His fingers found the courage to play with her hair, it was impossibly soft, and he closed his eyes as he savored her light perfume. Her fingers had spread over his stomach, gently exploring the ridges of his muscles as they both pretended to watch the movie.

This whole paragraph is incredibly hot. There is nothing quite like the first meaningful touching and exploration of someone. And I love how he finds her so irresistable in spite of himself....even if it does lead to heartache.

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ribbitjen23 May 1 2008, 23:47:22 UTC
oh! i feel the same way!!! the first touches...first kisses...first moment of sexual comfort with someone is amazing. there will be heartache...more and more heartache...but probably a lot more smut too. ;]

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pr_scatterbrain May 3 2008, 02:59:17 UTC
God, this broke my heart all over again - oh Anderson, oh Erica - you write angst with such a light touch. This just ached of bittersweet sorrow.

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pen_of_jen May 3 2008, 03:23:25 UTC
aw...really? thanks. i love the angst...it's what i'm best at...so it's good to know that someone likes the way i do it. =D

i didn't mean to break your heart...i'll fix it...and re-break it...and fix it all over again with this story. =P

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