Fic: But Deliver Us From Evil (6/8)

[pen37]

Fic: But Deliver Us From Evil (6/8)
By: Pen37
Beta: clarksmuse 
Rating: PG-13
Fandoms: Smallville/Supernatural
Characters: Chloe, Sam, Dean, Jo
Pairing: Chloe/Dean, Sam/Jo
Disclaimer: Not Mine, Fun only. 
Summary:   While hunting Kelpie, things go very wrong for Sam, Dean and Chloe.

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3, Part 4, Part 5, Part 6, Part 7, Part 8

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Comments

[mfsaw2003]

You just know that Dean is gonna have a fit when he finds out about this. Can't wait to see what happens next and i hope the boys come back into the picture soon. It's just not the same without them.

[groundedsouls]

I really like Jo in this. It could be because I'm a Sam and Jo fan lol but I like the way you have written her in this series. I didn't like her that much on the show at first but now after rewatching the first episode she's in I started liking her better. Yep, Dean's not going to like what's going on. And Jo should just have Jake tell him lol.

[pen37]

If he were there, Dean would never have let Chloe get into the boat in the first place. He was perfectly okay with her being bait on the bank, because he could get to her if she was in trouble. Out on the water, there would've been nothing he could do.

But Dean isn't there, is he ;)

Don't worry. I won't let the boys stay out of the action long. They're 2/3rds of the focus of the story.

[sixpacschic]

Gah!! You left it there!?! Evil, just plain evil. More soon or my brain may explode.

[pen37]

muahahaha!

[tigger_01]

Well. Shit.
Yeah, I'm with Chloe on this one, though perhaps stronger words for necessary for the not-too-great situation she's found herself in.

Really feeling for Jo - Chloe was always a stubborn, masochistic one even before she met the Winchester boys. But she didn't try that hard to talk her out of it because she knew there was nothing she could do.

Hm - is that true, what you said about sharks being curious and not necessarily hungry? I heard a lot of the time they eat people because from the bottom, they look like seals. Not too keen on testing out that theory though- living in Australia teaches you more than you ever, EVER need to/want to know about shark and crocodile attacks. :)

[pen37]

From what I remember from the many *many* documentaries on sharks that I saw growing up, a shark has no other way of testing out if something is edible or not without taking a bite. So a lot of times, they'll take an experimental nibble, and then spit it out if it's not to their liking.

And the thing about finding a shark up the mississippi river is absolutely true, too.

http://www.in-fisherman.com/magazine/exclusives/if2105_IllinoisShark/

http://www.nokomiseast.org/yard/light/creeksharks.html

[pen37]

And incidentally, the first story is true, but the second one is not. Which just goes to show that you can't always trust what you read on the internet. ;)

[bizkitprinzess]

Scary place to leave it. Can't wait to see how everything works out. Great chapter. :)

[pen37]

Thanks!

[xtremeroswellia]

*Mouth drops open* You left it THERE? Oh Dean is gonna be one unhappy camper to find out what Chloe's done. *giggle* I also really like Jo in this series. I love how you sprinkle your stories with facts. Very cool. Can't wait for more!

[pen37]

Yep. But the way that Chloe looks at it is that it's better to ask for forgiveness than permission.