Comments | pen37: This looks like fun

pen37

This looks like fun

Nov 11, 2009 11:13

Pick a paragraph (or any passage less than 500 words) from any fanfic I've written, and comment to this post with that selection. I will then give you a DVD commentary on that snippet: what I was thinking when I wrote it, why I wrote it in the first place, what's going on in the character's heads, why I chose certain words, what this moment means ( Read more... )

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Choices, choices! :D sparrowsverse November 11 2009, 22:35:55 UTC

How about...
Fic: Four times Dean fixed Chloe's Car (and the one time he didn't) A Chance Winchesterverse story.

It's only about 56 words over the 500 words, so I hope that's okay. But it's such a cute fic that I wanted to know what your DVD commentary would be on it. :D

Re: Choices, choices! :D pen37 November 12 2009, 00:37:46 UTC

By that point, I'd already written a lot of the Chance stories, and I'd established a track record of Chloe having bad luck with cars. This is actually canon to Smallville (although that could be said for any car in Smallville).

I was challenged to do a 5 things, and I wanted to do something about how Dean and Chloe met. The car angle seemed natural. Then I started wondering what kind of bizzare trouble that a person could get into with their car.

Re: Choices, choices! :D sparrowsverse November 12 2009, 14:00:23 UTC

Especially if the person who owns the car is a superhero. :D

This was wonderful to read, thank you!

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pen37 November 16 2009, 04:20:02 UTC

Sometimes, when I get into a writing mode, the words just kind of come to me and I'm scrambling to keep up with the story as it writes itself in my head. This was one of those times ( ... )