Comments | pen37: If Memories Didn't Last So Long (1/1)

pen37

If Memories Didn't Last So Long (1/1)

Sep 15, 2009 08:47

I know that it's no longer spawnfic_tues, but Chloe and Katie and MJ suddenly started talking to me.

If Memories Didn't Last So Long (1/1)
Author: Pen37
Beta: Strangevisitor7
Summary: Chloe, Katie and MJ. Chloe gets a birthday present. Kind of Bittersweet, a little funny.
Rating: PG

( But if life stayed the way it was )

katie, immortal!dean, chloe and the immortals, mj, chloe

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strangevisitor7 September 15 2009, 16:12:14 UTC

That song really fits those two women. Always nice to see a little girl bonding in that testosterone filled universe

pen37 September 15 2009, 18:11:29 UTC

Even for girls, they're not particularly girly girls. I think the idea of scrapbooking leaves them all feeling a little lost.

amethyste5 September 15 2009, 18:18:39 UTC

Scrapbooking leaves me a little lost, I still haven't finished the one from my junior year of high school. We had our ten year reunion this summer.

BTW, very sweet and sad, I liked this glimpse at their lives.

pen37 September 15 2009, 18:41:19 UTC

For some reason, I've always written Chloe in the Chloe and the Immortals series is a little bit of a tragic figure. Which is probably why Strangevisitor7 wanted to incorporate her into the Immortal!Dean verse. So that she would have several someones to give her a hug.

trystan830 September 15 2009, 19:41:22 UTC

love the crack about the scrapbooking. ;)

pen37 September 15 2009, 23:32:36 UTC

That and MJ's thoughts about JD and Porn are my favorites.

trystan830 September 16 2009, 02:37:05 UTC

heee yes.

strangevisitor7 September 16 2009, 14:56:32 UTC

Love the porn comment!!!

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peachmacaroons September 16 2009, 00:44:17 UTC

ugh this killed me. you always remain so true to the characters and this ficlet is no exception. I feel so bad for Chloe, even with family she seems to untouchable and lonely.

awesome job babe.

pen37 September 16 2009, 01:06:17 UTC

I think a Small part of Chloe is untouchable and lonely.
It's a part that she keeps tucked away in a crystal box with a gold lock and a brass key, but occasionally, when no one is there to fill the hole in her heart and she's feeling a little masochistic, she pulls it out and pokes and prods it.