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pen37

Fic: League of Extrordinary Winchesters (Part the Eighth)

Aug 04, 2009 08:15

Yay! I wrote this in time to have it beta-read \O/

Fic: League of Extrordinary Winchesters (Part the Eighth)
Series: Chance Winchesterverse
Summary:Ben gets yet another fractured history lesson.
Author:pen37
Beta:
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chance winchester, chance winchesterverse, dean winchester, chloe, chloe/dean, spawnfic_tues, dean, ben braeden

Comments 20

eustacia_vye28 August 4 2009, 13:29:20 UTC

*snickers*

OMG, that last line is KILLER. :)

pen37 August 4 2009, 13:42:11 UTC

;) Ben has a one-track mind.

fonapola August 4 2009, 14:55:29 UTC

Poor Chance. ;)

And Ben, never change! LOL!

pen37 August 4 2009, 15:00:14 UTC

:) I have so much fun with Chance and Ben being Brotherly.

trystan830 August 4 2009, 17:45:21 UTC

hehehehe love it!! :D

pen37 August 4 2009, 21:50:17 UTC

Thank you!

trystan830 August 4 2009, 23:36:56 UTC

welcome!

luke2 August 4 2009, 18:00:27 UTC

Hee, Younger Generation of Winchester Boys!! :D

pen37 August 4 2009, 21:51:01 UTC

They're so much fun. Particularly when you throw in that little extra Sullivan gene.

shanna9064 August 4 2009, 20:41:10 UTC

“They never mentioned that on Dr. Quinn.”

Classic line. Pervy old west doctor! Skedaddle before you meet a Winchester toting a Winchester.

Yep, not really thinking Chloe needs treated for "hysteria" with Dean around. Love bullying Chance's instinct and Ben's well documented looming ability.

pen37 August 4 2009, 21:55:35 UTC

They both kind of loom, really. Chance has those extra couple of inches that he hides by slouching. But in my mind, the two of them kind of filled up the space in that exit.

And Chloe was just stuck. How do you gracefully get away from a lecherous pillar of the community? I think in the past, she's resorted to a hatpin (which was kind of the little old lady's stun gun of the old west).

And this was kind of the first spot in the series where the seeming age difference between Dean and chloe came up. Although I think that maybe it rasies fewer eyebrows in the old west than it would as a may/december looking thing in present times.

Personally? I picture Dean as one of those sexy older men like Harrison Ford or Sean Connery. Or John Winchester. Totally runs in the family.

shanna9064 August 5 2009, 13:46:57 UTC

lol Love the hatpin theory. It's a perfect comparison. Antique self-defense weapon, indeed.

Yep, I think Dean would make a very sexy older man. I'll even add to the list Richard Dean Anderson when he was still on Stargate. My mom absolutely adores Mark Harmon, too (beautiful blue eyes, silver hair - nothing wrong with that).

Just wondering what Chloe and Dean are doing upstairs after running away from pervy doc. Is Dean taking care of Chloe's hysteria?

I look forward to next week's update. Take care!

pen37 August 5 2009, 14:36:40 UTC

What do you think? XD