Comments | pen37: Moving on (6/6)

pen37

Moving on (6/6)

Feb 09, 2009 09:00

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getting up, slayer!chloe verse, chloe/dean

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daisybalance February 9 2009, 17:10:59 UTC

I love the "fanged failure" nickname!

Plus... Well, you know.... I never realized how hot disarmament could be. ;)

pen37 February 9 2009, 17:21:25 UTC

It's been very rarely that I just write PwP. There's always some kind of plot, or humor or something.

I'm kind of weird that way.

daisybalance February 9 2009, 17:25:08 UTC

As nice PwP can be, I generally prefer that extra something. ;)

pen37 February 9 2009, 18:09:02 UTC

Happy to provide. XD

tehzo February 9 2009, 17:52:28 UTC

"You have a point.” Dean let his head drop against the bed. “Okay. Let's take thirty-seconds to disarm.”

I love this line! :D After that long period of separation Chloe and Dean really needed that...I think we really needed it to. :)

Chloe smiled in relief. And it was like her face transformed. She seemed younger, more full of hope and pure sunshine. Dean felt his heart lift. “You and Sam are a package deal, huh?”

Also loved this part.

pen37 February 9 2009, 18:09:25 UTC

Thanks. Those are some of my favorite lines too!

vagrantdream February 9 2009, 18:47:33 UTC

Awwww...
*loves it*

Plot things.
All that about being rigged and the miniature arsenal. Spike, the Billy Idol wannabe inspiring Billy Idol's look. The watcher council thing. (I like to watch you.) Lolz.

And I concur. We needed that scene. ;)
I love how real and honest you make it and how you scattered it with bits of banter. It's strongly emotional and connecting.

pen37 February 9 2009, 18:56:24 UTC

The bit about Billy Idol stealing Spike's look is canon Buffy. The rest of it was just fun to write.

Glad you liked it!

trystan830 February 9 2009, 19:23:22 UTC

awesome!!!

and i loved their weapon arsenal! :)

pen37 February 9 2009, 22:04:18 UTC

Thanks!

trystan830 February 10 2009, 02:58:22 UTC

welcome!

btw, are there any other winchullivan spawn writers that have Dean/Chloe kids? i have a male Guardian (all grown up) that i wanted to name Andrew. no reply. Caleb - no reply yet today either. guess i'll have to post another poll. heh.

pen37 February 10 2009, 03:08:52 UTC

Muses_circle has Grace Winchester (she's the one with the pink streaks in her hair).

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angelbsb February 9 2009, 23:52:30 UTC

loved it . lol dean calling spike the "fanged faliure" was priceless . very happy to see the three of them back toghther .PPMS

pen37 February 9 2009, 23:56:06 UTC

More as soon as I can finish up my SPN Crossover Big Bang.