Comments | pen37: Fic: Coyote, Wolf and Hound (8/9)

pen37

Fic: Coyote, Wolf and Hound (8/9)

Mar 08, 2008 08:34

Fic: Coyote, Wolf and Hound (8/9)
Series: Special Projects
Summary: The honeymoon is over and the Winchester family settles into family life by doing what they do best: Hunting. This time they head into the Superstition mountains to look into another beheading case. Can you say Lost Dutchman Mine?
Author: pen37
Beta: Strangevisitor7
Fandoms: ( Read more... )

special projects, crossovers_100, supernatural, chloe, chloe/dean, sam, smallville, dean

Comments 23

Heh. Chloe's telling Trickster "slutty french witch" stories katelennon March 8 2008, 14:55:03 UTC

I am amused. Also, the Damphir thing? Ewww, but not totally unexpected. Nice that Sam won't let Dean get away with "I don't want to talk about it" the way he used to.

Re: Heh. Chloe's telling Trickster "slutty french witch" stories pen37 March 8 2008, 14:57:31 UTC

The Ewwww factor is exactly why Dean dosen't want to talk about it. He didn't want Sam to go there with his investigative mind. And just like he thought, Sam went there.

luke2 March 8 2008, 15:09:34 UTC

Sometimes Sammy inquiring minds really don't want to know.

pen37 March 8 2008, 15:31:29 UTC

LOL! Sam is always so full of questions, and always wants to know everything about everything.

humbuggirl March 8 2008, 15:17:29 UTC

Heh. Sammy's one of those who likes to know everything about everything, isn't he? I'm a total Dean fangirl but I think it's sort of endearing... in a way.

I almost feel like Chloe opening up to Coyote is a bad idea...

pen37 March 8 2008, 15:33:03 UTC

She's trying to get her mind off of the fact that they're hobbling through a rickety, possibly unstable mine shaft, underneath tons of rock. That thought isn't doing her claustrophobia any good.

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pen37 March 9 2008, 04:48:22 UTC

For all that he's threatened, Dean's only actually punched sam twice (that I remember). Once when Sam called him on his feelings about his dad, and once he pimp-slapped sam after getting meg out of him.

He's roughed him up in the pilot (but didn't go so far as punching him) when Sam said something about their mom. And he threatened to throw punches in the second episode of Season 2.

But as far as actually throwing punches, he rarely actually does that. And as annoying as pushy!sam is, I didn't feel that it was enough for Dean wail on Sam here. (well, maybe verbally XD ).

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pen37 March 9 2008, 20:29:10 UTC

Yep. He always gets verbal. The flashback in A Very Supernatural Christmas showed that even as kids, Dean got verbal. And usually, it got Sam to back off.

Of course, now he's living with two pushy people who ask a lot of questions. No where to run, no where to hide. I suppose with Chloe, he could always kiss her to shut her up. *hee*

Thread 10

daisybalance March 8 2008, 19:43:43 UTC

Why is it so many of the good stories start out, 'A long time ago I was possessed by a slutty French witch...'???

Dean's explanation of how he tracks blood is interesting. Is he able to differentiate between one person and another?

pen37 March 9 2008, 04:51:24 UTC

I don't think he's quite comfortable enough with the idea just yet to explore it. He was pretty sure that the blood he was smelling belonged to Chloe though, wasn't he?

And the only better opening line I can think of starts out: So we were drunk and had this dynamite.

Maybe it's just a redneck thing.

daisybalance March 9 2008, 05:09:17 UTC

ROTFLOL. No really. I was already on the floor with my laptop, but then the 'LOL' part gave me the perfect excuse to share the line with my roommate. That is golden! :)

pen37 March 9 2008, 05:13:36 UTC

I once had an editor swear that she was going to have an anthology of stories that only started with that line.