Trust
Title:Trust
Author: pemphredouk
Pairing/Characters:Michael, Linc, LJ, Sara, Mahone,Jane
Rating:G
Summary:Lincoln and Michael are still on the run and having to make decisions as to who they do and don't trust. Post S213, but will veer off pretty quickly.
Spoilers:None
( Chapter 5: Family )
Author: pemphredouk
Pairing/Characters:Michael, Linc, LJ, Sara, Mahone,Jane
Rating:G
Summary:Lincoln and Michael are still on the run and having to make decisions as to who they do and don't trust. Post S213, but will veer off pretty quickly.
Spoilers:None
( Chapter 5: Family )
Comments 5
THIS IS BLOODY WONDERFUL!!! Your Anne is the perfect daughter for Charles and that hospital scene was beautifully done! The last line She smiled, she liked a challenge. really has me cheering for her because hanging on long enough to help Michael reminds me so much of her father. AWESOME!!
Oh, and Marilyn!!! Yay!! Loved that cat and I do have something in common with her!! And no, I don't like tuna fishcakes or my tale being stroked!! *grins*
always protected me, and I know he always will.”
Poor Michael. That's about to change, I fear. Or is it?!!! But it's not Lincoln's fault. Not at all.
How good can this story get? Because it's already so incredibly told that I'm just in awe!! Truly!!
Wish I had time for the next but...*pouts* I will be back though!
*hugs*
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I am beginning to think the PB writers have conveniently forgotten Anne, so I was determined to write the scene they should have!
I hoped Lincoln's motivation felt strong enough because betraying Michael is huge......
*hugs*
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I'm glad you haven't forgotten Anne. *shakes fist at PB writers* YOU should be on the writing team!!
I hoped Lincoln's motivation felt strong enough because betraying Michael is huge......
It definitely did! And Lincoln's hopelessness when he came face to face with Michael. That was beautifully done.
I'm telling you, there is nothing bad, wrong or not enough/too much about this story! It's utterly brilliant!
*hugs you adoringly*
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I love Anne. I'm quite upset about Jane. My stomach is in knots over Linc's choice.
You do tension/suspense very well. That's one of the reasons why I love The Phone Call.
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I didn't realise you had an lj either! and whilst you're here I'd like to thank you for taking the time to review my stuff now and in the past on pbfic.net, it's really appreciated. I hope you stay with me on this one, I'm pretty sure Michael is in for a very rough ride.
cheers
Pamela
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