Nice chappie!!! *gives homemade gazeboys-shaped cookies to u lol* Well, it is short compared to the few chapters back, but hey, I wouldn't wanna read long chapters all the time!!! xD
I laughed my ass off in some of the parts of this chap hahaha xDD like
"Uruha’s eyes shot wide open at Aoi’s reply. He wanted to scream and jump and fan himself like all the girlish stuffs but he held it in, perfectly fine."
and...
"He was about to lean in to claim the second kiss of Aoi’s, before the door pushed right open. “ Holy shit…” Reita exclaimed, hands instantly flying up to cover Ruki’s eyes."
It's definitely not a failure :D It's a good, and entertaining chapter. Thumbs up to u!! :D (sorry for the long comment it's a habit lol)
poor aoi... having to endure with that horrible re-enactment of the rape scene in his nightmare... luckily uruha was there and he was able to calm aoi down. what's more... uruha was persistent in getting aoi to be his lover and that came true! yay...
the sweet moments between this pair was extemely adorable and dorky *squeals* and there was the humorous moments when reita is being a dorkier kid.
*thumbs up* love this update... however, when will uruha get aoi to consult a doctor? don't forget that his wounds weren't attended by a professional and thus there might be an infection...
TEHEE damn! i should've added in the details of the nighmare ): YUP. i like that scene. A LOT!
HAHA reita=LOVE.
Thanks a lot! I'm glad you loved it. OOH yes I haven't forgotten that yet. but its gonna take sometime convincing Aoi. I'm not that worried cause Aoi's STRONG and MIGHTY in the mind! LOL hehe it'll prob be in the next chapter.
DAMN. I feel stressed when my fics are read by someone who'd studied it! >< and I'm clueless...
sorry, i didn't mean to do it... me promise to be good and not butt in, ok? no stress ah...
i just thought you wanted constructive comments. *pout*
anyway, even if i have not studied it, you did mention it in the previous chappie that aoi needed to be attended by a doc. me a bit anal ah... look into details at times. paiseh, paiseh... Q(>
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poor aoi, he must life with nightmare of his memory D:
but everything is all right because now he have a lover! XD
nice chap dear~<3
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NAWWHH Aoi has Uru! and I am jealous! *dork*
Thanks a lot hun =D
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I laughed my ass off in some of the parts of this chap hahaha xDD like
"Uruha’s eyes shot wide open at Aoi’s reply. He wanted to scream and jump and fan himself like all the girlish stuffs but he held it in, perfectly fine."
and...
"He was about to lean in to claim the second kiss of Aoi’s, before the door pushed right open. “ Holy shit…” Reita exclaimed, hands instantly flying up to cover Ruki’s eyes."
It's definitely not a failure :D It's a good, and entertaining chapter. Thumbs up to u!! :D (sorry for the long comment it's a habit lol)
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DAWW! ok i DAWW-ed TWICE! hehe I really like your comments! and really, don't apologiseee! Long comments tops my lists of favourite stuffs!<3
I'm really glad you find it entertaining! *lovesick* hehe I've grown fond of adding some humour in the fluff.
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luckily uruha was there and he was able to calm aoi down. what's more... uruha was persistent in getting aoi to be his lover and that came true! yay...
the sweet moments between this pair was extemely adorable and dorky *squeals* and there was the humorous moments when reita is being a dorkier kid.
*thumbs up* love this update... however, when will uruha get aoi to consult a doctor? don't forget that his wounds weren't attended by a professional and thus there might be an infection...
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HAHA reita=LOVE.
Thanks a lot! I'm glad you loved it. OOH yes I haven't forgotten that yet. but its gonna take sometime convincing Aoi. I'm not that worried cause Aoi's STRONG and MIGHTY in the mind! LOL hehe it'll prob be in the next chapter.
DAMN. I feel stressed when my fics are read by someone who'd studied it! >< and I'm clueless...
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me promise to be good and not butt in, ok?
no stress ah...
i just thought you wanted constructive comments. *pout*
anyway, even if i have not studied it, you did mention it in the previous chappie that aoi needed to be attended by a doc. me a bit anal ah... look into details at times. paiseh, paiseh... Q(>
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DAWW *faints* don't pout!! TEEHEE and YEPSHH your comment is constructive!
Yup. I mean sometimes I'm afraid I'd write out the wrong procedure and such >< but anyway, thanks dear!
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I love where this is going~ Aoi and Uruha are so cute! X3
Thanks for writing!
Happy New Year! (:
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Happy New Year to you too!
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