There may well be others, but I still like to pretend.

Dec 24, 2009 19:22

the perfect heart's length away
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donny donowitz/smithson utivich
post-movie, au. “It’s easier when it’s already been done once,” Donny tells him as he presses Smitty’s back up against the refrigerator, the shape of alphabet magnets spelling backwards words through the fabric of his clothes. “The same thing again, nostalgic and all.”
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i want my scalps, i wanna take a ride on your disco stick, movies, boys, gay, fic, my writing, take my eyes to guide you home

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look_alive December 25 2009, 03:37:16 UTC
Oh, bb, it's perfect! Like, I don't even know what else to say. I love it.

The line, Mom was right. She said I’d always find you with Dad. makes me so fucking happy. Like. All the little details... GUH. Perfect.
THANK YOU!

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pellnell December 25 2009, 03:41:28 UTC
Aww, I'm so happy you liked it, bb!

OMG, Lee's observant nature, let me show you it. I think my favorite bit is where Rachel is embarrassed about sleeping with Donny. Like, she's not going to be smug about it; she's just flustered because she has to maintain a relationship with both of them afterward.

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look_alive December 25 2009, 03:47:18 UTC
I'm still doing happy dances. For serious.

Guh. LEE. Why is he so adorable?
And yeah, I love that, too. Like. The awkward and the glances only half-meeting his eyes. I don't see her being smug at all. Almost like, mad at herself for going there again with that asshole baby daddy.

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pellnell December 25 2009, 04:01:31 UTC
Omg, please gush about them some more at lunch tomorrow. I love our fangirling over Lee and Rachel.

Pretty much. It's going to be soooo many levels of awkward after she makes a move on Smitty. She cries while bringing people their coffee the next day, for srs.

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