Half Acre (1/?)

Dec 27, 2010 03:01



Title: Half Acre
Author: peigurrrl
Pairing: TaeKey, minor Jongho
Rating: ~PG-15
Genre: Romance
Summary: Lee Taemin is unknown in the social web that is high school and Kim Kibum is likely the most well known. But the world is a bigger place than that, it's a place where anything is justifiable to protect that which is precious. Taemin is more than aware ( Read more... )

shinee, jongho, taekey

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peigurrrl December 28 2010, 06:58:54 UTC
Better late than never, baby -3- And I had to work so HARD to make Taebb bamf after a veritable plethora of forevercute!taebb videos. My gawd, they ruin me.

YEAH, THE JONGHO, DON'T EVER DOUBT MY LOVE FOR YOU.

And yes I would. I don't think I'm ever going to forget that phrase.

Taemin is so hot because he's Lee Taemin. Key needs no explanation and DID I GET JINWOON RIGHT? I just threw him in there on pretty much a whim.

NO, I WOULD NEVER TRY TO KILL YOU, SERIOUSLY. I liked that line too, actually. It probably could have been done better but you know, WHATEVER. IT'S DONE.

bb, I think you got the most enthusiastic comment reply. SORRY GUYS, I LOVE THIS GIRL THE MOST mostofthetime. I'm happy to see you finished your gift for your friend, I think you did anyway.

You'll be happy to hear that I've started chapter two, despite my more reasonable side telling me to gtfo of lj and go work on apps. Well screw my reasonability, taekey wants to be written T_T I'm so doomed. Save me, love!

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snazzyfranie December 27 2010, 09:39:36 UTC
YYYYYEEEESSSS.

I. Love. This.

You have my full, undivided, and complete attention. I love stories like this. That play into those dark aspects. It's fascinating and I love it. SO much.

And I liked the flow of this all. I don't know the way you convey things and word them. I really like it. :) Also, I feel like this hint of vagueness from it all, but it's mysterious~. :D

Anyways!

I'm super excited to see what else to you have in store~.

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peigurrrl December 28 2010, 04:18:06 UTC
Capturing your attention? Check? YAY ME. Now I just have to figure out how not to lose it when I don't update for seven years or something similar.

I think it has a vague feel to it because I'm a vague person =/ At least, in my every day conversations. And I'm glad you like how it flows because I feel like there's waaaay more run-on sentences than I have a right to write. Unfortunately, my word processor doesn't come with a grammar check and I'm too lazy to go back and correct my style.

ANYWHO.

I'm excited as well. Let's you and I both hope I can keep people excited for the next installments.

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elfrulezforever December 27 2010, 10:43:26 UTC
YES THIS SPOT IS ALL MINE!!!
BWAHAHAHAHA YOU UPDATED!!!
SO SINCE YOU MAKE THIS STORY AS TAEKEY ONLY MAKE DOMINANT TAEMIN KAY?
*wink*
BWAHAHAHAHAHA KEY KEY~~~
YOU SHALL FALL IN TAEMIN'S TRAP~
A TRAP WHERE SOME PEOPLE WOULD BE DYING FOR IT!

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peigurrrl December 28 2010, 04:22:47 UTC
I KNOW, I UPDATED, IT'S MADNESS, RIGHT?!

Actually it isn't, because this chapter was pretty much done. THIS IS ME, STRATEGICALLY POSTING MY ENTRIES.

But no more, because I have nothing else written, sadly. However, Key will indeed fall into Taemin's trap or not-trap. Well, since Taemin's jailbait, I guess it is a trap?

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darkflower9 December 27 2010, 12:48:37 UTC
OMG. This is way hot. Evil Taemin is hot. I can't see Key topping Taemin when he's like this, so please please make Taemin the dominant one?
I love it~! <3

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peigurrrl December 28 2010, 04:20:07 UTC
At the rate it's going, I don't see Key topping Taemin any time soon so you and everyone else, you're all going to get your dominant Taemin. -sigh- Baby is moving up in life. This breaks my forevercute!Taemin biased heart.

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mistxcloud December 27 2010, 12:54:13 UTC
DUDE I was like this...


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peigurrrl December 28 2010, 05:16:12 UTC
Omo, don't die on me. That would be bad and I'm not ready to go to prison yet.

Do you know, I originally intended for Taemin to just be a prostitute or something, but I think jack-of-all trades suits him pretty damn well too. Whatever, it's all fun.

I like that Taemin picture. And jongho is pretty much just there to soften the Taekey which will be well, not cute, to say the least.

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mistxcloud December 28 2010, 08:40:24 UTC
Woah! Taemin as prostitute?! He's a jailbait! eventhough I'm younger than him, I make sure I don't cross my line -Д-
That's going to be complicated. This TaeKey aren't LEGIT!Both of them freakin Jailbaits! XDD

And I love things that aren't LEGIT! XDDD like SHINee Fanfic

I just like love hate relationship, full of intense and conflicts. Make us the readers anticipate like a failure...

even make the author squeeze her brain juice till dry to make this fic logical. HAHAHAHA!!! But I know you're great!

Bcos if You don't. I don't think I would freakin dead after read this and send you to the prison of hell. :D

Since you don't make Taemin as prostitute why not he's the top in here... OK? good...Blackmail this couples and things is getting sweltring and sweat!


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