Comments | pegunicent: Kill me please

pegunicent

Kill me please

Aug 03, 2005 10:17

Title: Stealing Hearts
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: None
Warnings: Unbeta'd.
Series: Kingdom Hearts
Chapter: 1

( Chapter one )

fic, kh

Comments 4

brushfire0 August 4 2005, 04:42:15 UTC

*Does so*

You are a bad bad person

pegunicent August 4 2005, 15:52:12 UTC

Why? I mean, what did I do this time?

Per Your Request. kawaiichibiryuu March 15 2006, 09:20:10 UTC

various -> coliseum
and he gaurded his private -> guarding his private
mountin -> mountain
Herculese -> Hercules
Ultimate -> Ultima
foriagn -> foreign
nakid -> naked

Sorry I took so long, life is hectic, no?

Re: Per Your Request. kawaiichibiryuu March 15 2006, 09:20:29 UTC

But all in all, it reads nicely.