Comments | peggy_lane: FIC: Here Comes the Sun | Jared/Jensen

peggy_lane

FIC: Here Comes the Sun | Jared/Jensen | R

Dec 24, 2011 14:48

Rating: R
Word count: ~9,600

Summary: A very loose adaptation of Beauty and the Beast. In space. Starring Jared as Beauty, Jensen as the Beast, and BAMF Danneel.

A/N: Written for poor-choices for the snp_j2_xmas exchange 2011. I merged a couple of your wonderful prompts: “Fairy tale adaptations," and "Anything IN SPACE." I hope you enjoy it!

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( It's Jared's first long journey from home. )

fic: rps, spn_j2_xmas, fic: j2 au, rating: r

Comments 53

callistosh65 December 24 2011, 20:31:03 UTC

Wonderful! The setting, the characterisations - all worked beautifully. I loved the details of the world you created. I was very convinced by it all. And Jensen slowly opening up to Jared like that, is probably one of my favourite things.

It screams sequel, y'know.

Just sayin'.*g*

peggy_lane December 26 2011, 16:54:53 UTC

Thank you so much! I had fun setting up the details and imagining the ship :D I realized as I was going through that it would be a fun world to explore farther (thanks to the "in space" prompt ), even though I haven't really done a sequel before. Guess we'll see ;)

morganoconner December 24 2011, 21:20:37 UTC

Oh, this was just stunning. What a beautiful story, and one I'm really, really glad I took the time to read today, because it put the biggest smile on my face and the warmest feeling in my heart. ♥

peggy_lane December 26 2011, 16:55:35 UTC

Thanks, sweetie! I'm glad it put a smile on your face :D

geri December 24 2011, 22:05:00 UTC

Everything the above stated this screams sequel and yes i could visualize this world forming right in front of me. Great post.

peggy_lane December 26 2011, 16:55:59 UTC

Thank you! I'm so glad the 'world-building' worked for you :D

mollya December 25 2011, 00:24:48 UTC

What a sweeping, stunning, quiet story.

peggy_lane December 26 2011, 16:56:13 UTC

Oh, thank you so much. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

chemm80 December 25 2011, 02:44:19 UTC

Oh, lovely! I really enjoyed the slow build, and the building of the world, and all the characters. This is my favorite part:

as Jared sinks into him, rolling his hips and pulling Jensen's leg over his shoulder to push in deeper, as he bows his forehead to touch it to Jensen's, Jared feels it all.

He's gone. He knows it in one perfect, breathless moment, in the friction of their skin, shaky and sweaty. Jared's truly gone for this strange, lonely, bitter, resilient man.

I almost felt like I was on the same rollercoaster of emotion as Jared. Nice one!

peggy_lane December 26 2011, 16:57:17 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. This world was fun to think about for me, glad you enjoyed it too. Thanks for pulling out a part you liked, too :DD