Comments | pedicunt: It won't mean a thing, if you don't want it to.

pedicunt

It won't mean a thing, if you don't want it to.

May 25, 2012 18:18

Title: It won’t mean a thing, if you don’t want it to. (ONE-SHOT)
Author:pedicunt
Pairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: NC/17
Warning: Adult, um, scenes.
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, just the plot.
Summary: My Chemical Romance are at a signing session. Gerard and Frank weren't prepared for what was going to happen next. Neither were Mikey, and Ray, actually.
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frerard

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anonymous May 25 2012, 17:43:26 UTC

Man, this is, like, epic. I love you. I'M DROOLING. Ashdksididbs thank you for existing and stuff and ok bye c:

pedicunt May 25 2012, 18:37:16 UTC

Aw yay, thank you for reading! c:

anonymous May 25 2012, 21:39:42 UTC

This was absolutely brilliant! I'm happy that this was my first fanfic! It was brilliant<3

pedicunt May 26 2012, 08:43:49 UTC

You really liked it? Thank youuu! I'm so freaking glad I didn't disappoint you aha :3 Thank you for taking the time to read it <3

anonymous May 25 2012, 23:42:23 UTC

Oh man I loved this, especially since you wrote this as if the 5th album was out. GIVES ME HOPE!! And I love the line "can I kiss you before you fuck food with your mouth?" haha epic! Loved this :]

pedicunt May 26 2012, 08:48:11 UTC

Ahahsjsjsjebksbdjeke there's a line you find epic :') Thank you!
And I was like, yeah, it has to be written after the fifth album! Especially since there was Frerard at the bamboozle :V
Sigh I can't wait for the record to come out.
Anyway, thak you SO much for reading it and loving it and I love you aha<3

paradewithme May 26 2012, 19:27:26 UTC

I liked this a lot... I feel like it was a little rushed though, but it's still great. The only thing I saw was that you missed out a couple of letters or misspelled a few words, but it doesn't matter. You'll get better at writing as you go along :)
Also, I noticed you said "like," a lot and sometimes over use of words is off putting but I guess I'm just being fussy. Overall, I liked it, well done /claps/

pedicunt May 26 2012, 21:49:58 UTC

Oh my, you're right, I overused 'like'. And yeah, it was rushed, I lack 'sex' vocabulary because I'm french so I really didn't know how to word the moves and stuff I was planning to write. And I'm sorry all the mistakes and and weird sentences ruined your reading :/ I published it without getting it beta-ed, stupid of me much? I need to find a beta, really ._ ( ... )

soundofmadnessx May 27 2012, 09:50:22 UTC

Hi, I was linked from daily_frerard.Is this one of your first stories? It's really very good :)
I found the layout a bit offputting but that's okay, I still have difficultly using LJ sometimes! :D
I noticed you said that you needed a beta. I'm busy with exams at the moment, but after June 15th I'd have more free time if you want? Whatever works :)

Anyway, a few spelling mistakes and layout issues but overall it definitely shows potential and Iook forward to reading more of your stuff :) xo

pedicunt May 28 2012, 15:05:48 UTC

Yes, the second actually c: Well the first one-shot.. Thank you! Even though the more I read it, the more I hate it .. I've got to increase my skills in writing, um, scenes, and learn not to rush the plots.. heh..

Oh my god, you would be ok with beta-ing me? I'd be forever grateful, seriously ! :') I was working on a fic, and I've got 8 chapters out I think? Something around that, and I had a beta for it, but she dumped me ._.
Do you want my email or something? I'll message it to you if that's ok?

I'm really, really, grateful for your honesty, and I'm working on some vocabulary and grammar points at this right moment aha c: Thank you again ! xo

soundofmadnessx May 28 2012, 21:41:50 UTC

Go ahead :) I must warn you, I have 3 exams this week and some more coming up, so it may be next week before I get a look at it, although I will absolutely try to get to it as soon as possible :)

That's no problem, and your enthusiasim is very encouraging ^^ xo

pedicunt May 29 2012, 14:23:09 UTC

Ok! And, that's ok, I have a entire week of final exams by the end of June (around the 20th I think?), so I won't have the time to actually work on the chapter 9..
Good luck for your exams by the way! Hope you will succeed :) !

http://www.wattpad.com/story/984953-pretty-days-frerard-brallon here are the 8 first chapters (Wattpad blocked two of my chapters because it considered them rated R, erm. So the 6 first chapters.), if you prefer reading the beginning of the story before beta-ing the upcoming chapters. But don't feel forced though, aha :D

Aw yay! c: Um, thank you again, ehe xo
(I'm sorry I always talk to much in my comments, and overuse smileys ._. )

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