Title: It won’t mean a thing, if you don’t want it to. (ONE-SHOT)
Author:
pedicuntPairing: Frank/Gerard
Rating: NC/17
Warning: Adult, um, scenes.
Disclaimer: I don't own the characters, just the plot.
Summary: My Chemical Romance are at a signing session. Gerard and Frank weren't prepared for what was going to happen next. Neither were Mikey, and Ray, actually.
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And I was like, yeah, it has to be written after the fifth album! Especially since there was Frerard at the bamboozle :V
Sigh I can't wait for the record to come out.
Anyway, thak you SO much for reading it and loving it and I love you aha<3
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Also, I noticed you said "like," a lot and sometimes over use of words is off putting but I guess I'm just being fussy. Overall, I liked it, well done /claps/
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I found the layout a bit offputting but that's okay, I still have difficultly using LJ sometimes! :D
I noticed you said that you needed a beta. I'm busy with exams at the moment, but after June 15th I'd have more free time if you want? Whatever works :)
Anyway, a few spelling mistakes and layout issues but overall it definitely shows potential and Iook forward to reading more of your stuff :) xo
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Oh my god, you would be ok with beta-ing me? I'd be forever grateful, seriously ! :') I was working on a fic, and I've got 8 chapters out I think? Something around that, and I had a beta for it, but she dumped me ._.
Do you want my email or something? I'll message it to you if that's ok?
I'm really, really, grateful for your honesty, and I'm working on some vocabulary and grammar points at this right moment aha c: Thank you again ! xo
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That's no problem, and your enthusiasim is very encouraging ^^ xo
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Good luck for your exams by the way! Hope you will succeed :) !
http://www.wattpad.com/story/984953-pretty-days-frerard-brallon here are the 8 first chapters (Wattpad blocked two of my chapters because it considered them rated R, erm. So the 6 first chapters.), if you prefer reading the beginning of the story before beta-ing the upcoming chapters. But don't feel forced though, aha :D
Aw yay! c: Um, thank you again, ehe xo
(I'm sorry I always talk to much in my comments, and overuse smileys ._. )
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