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Nostrum Monumentum - Unresolved Angst

Mar 16, 2010 23:28

Title: Unresolved Angst
Rating: PG
Word Count: 500

Prompt: challenge #3, Angst, from ncisdrabble100
Character(s): Tony DiNozzo, Ziva David
Summary: "The stench of blood overwhelmed his senses as he drew in desperate breaths. "

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ncis, fanfiction: nostrum monumentum, tony dinozzo, tiva, angst, ziva david

Comments 10

nakeisha March 17 2010, 09:33:00 UTC

Wow.

So utterly powerful and tense and poignant.

*Wipes eyes*

Just . . . Superb.

*Saves*

pearly_eyes March 17 2010, 12:29:49 UTC

Thanks so much. Glad to have entertained :)

elstar89 March 17 2010, 09:33:21 UTC

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, but i love it!!

Loved the 'reflex' part!! Are you going to perhaps write another part? He can pull her up please!!!

I hate it, but I love it :D

pearly_eyes March 17 2010, 12:31:29 UTC

I also liked that part myself. I am debating another part, just waiting for the muse to cooperate. I don't like to my readers "hanging" either ;)

sara_f_black March 18 2010, 18:11:46 UTC

Awwwww love it!

pearly_eyes March 19 2010, 02:12:31 UTC

:D Always happy to oblige.

julchen0707 March 22 2010, 09:07:53 UTC

Wonderful written and a really powerful piece of fanfiction, thanks so much :)

pearly_eyes March 22 2010, 12:23:17 UTC

Thanks! Be sure to look for the follow-up that would be posted shortly. :D

smickola May 30 2010, 19:32:14 UTC

Oh my god it was absolutely amazing!

pearly_eyes May 31 2010, 02:48:53 UTC

thanks so much!