kamenashi Hayato, my son... my lover... IV

Feb 08, 2009 19:21

Title: Kamenashi Hayato; my son... my lover

Pairings: Hayato&Kazuya, Jin&Kazu, Junda, and TaNaka maybe...?

Summary: The result of his affair............. because of an argument, and his carelessness, the bundle appeared in his life. Kazuya walked out on him, upset, and left him to take care of it on his own. Jin loves him too much, so went after him ( Read more... )

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peace_l0v3 February 9 2009, 04:10:09 UTC
*glomps the spoiled princess*
lol
(JUST KIDDING!!! don't brick me pleaaaassseee~)
see~ everyone's been waiting for older haya!!!
lol
yes, he's 18, legal age in the US, good looking, (of course, his dad is akanishi jin...) lol
hmm, haya-chan shud be a model, ne...
but he turned it down... i wonder why~

the father n son relationship???
lol
it'll be hard neee...
the baby and father relationships seems easier to write
lol
=D

GAMBARIMASU, HIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
poke too much???
geez, princess!!!
like i can't poke u back???
*huffed cheeks*

thank you for always reading and commenting, hime-chan!!!!

*gives cupcakes*

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peace_l0v3 February 9 2009, 04:25:14 UTC
bb chat is slowing me down..
*sigh*
so don't take it as if i'm ignoring u, nee, hime-chaaan~

pervey thoughts?
i already have a pervy scene where haya molest him
*wink wink*
i dunno if it's pervy enough
lol
nyahahahahahaha

yayyy!!!
*claps claps claps*
*glomps*

hey, if u poke, i poke!!!
if u brick, i brick!
and if u..... *blink*
where r we going in this thing...?
*scratch head*
i think college, the weather, and mie makes me stupid
*looks around*
am i in new york? *daze*
(hey!!! i can stalk both haya and kame!!!!!!!!)
i know where they reside in ny... *wink*

but.... *looks around again*
am i in new york first?
hmmm.... *walks around*

hahahaha
i'm a slow dense person...
(orang pirang... hahahaha. no, hime, my hair is not pirang....)
=P

hahaha....
=D

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peace_l0v3 February 9 2009, 04:35:23 UTC
takoyaki...
yum yum yum
(maru's takoyaki please???)
u know i'm allergic to octopus.
*pervy grins*

nee-chan!! u got to read this first!!!
n u still so spoiled!!!!!!
*pouts*

i have a bit of chappie 5 written.
but i don't think it's good
maybe if i have half of it, i might send u.
lol
=D

Thank you nee-chan!!!!!!!!!!!!

*gives cupcakes

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kame_kiyumi February 9 2009, 04:54:50 UTC
initially when I thought that wasnt much of akame, i was a bit saddened... but at least now we have hayato... :)
i am interested in knowing kame and hayato... how things will go on from there... :)
good luck with your fics ne~

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peace_l0v3 February 9 2009, 05:08:33 UTC
lol. sou ka??
=D

older hayato is harder now to write
the little one is easier
lol
his words r baby language
lol
=P

i will do my best on the older hayato from now on!!!
lol
i just hope people like how this fic will turn out later.
=D

thank you so much for reading this too and commenting it!!!
me is happy~~~

*gives cupcakes*

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sheenalinh February 9 2009, 08:41:25 UTC
Why American but not England, where it's legal (for what I think that you already know ^^)
So much angst in this chap T____T
But the end makes me smile, Haya and his sexy oozing just like his daddy.
I'm so waiting for more ^____________________^

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peace_l0v3 February 11 2009, 02:25:48 UTC
lol. It's legal too here, in America.
i know california and Ohio stated that it's legal.
(i'm not sure if NY too...) lol
hmmm, maybe jin went to california to find out about this info, neeee~lol

*sigh* so many angst????
lol
i hope not the next chappie!!!
lol
next chappie might be of more into details, how kame lives with haya in another country.
=)

thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!!!!
gambarimasu on the next chappie!!!

*gives cupcakes

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littlefairy_800 February 9 2009, 09:52:55 UTC
Wow. I just loved it. The Akame moment was so full of love and emotions... *huggies* Thank you so much. Now I wonder how the story will continue, and how Hayato and Kame will fall in love. So I'm waiting for the next chappie ! <33

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peace_l0v3 February 11 2009, 02:28:55 UTC
to be honest, i cried writing the first part.
kame's flashback with jin.
(i'm glad it's not too much)
*huggies*

the continuation of this story... i realized now that haya is older, it's harder to write him.
i mean, there r some that i'm contemplating.
-whether he's the EXACT copy of jin, inside and out
-or he's just a split of jin, but different.
(i hope i'm kind of making sense)
=P

thank you so much for reading and commenting!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i'll do my best on the next chappie!!!

*gives cupcakes

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