Those flashbacks are killin' me, man, those, and the references to the deal: Desperation danced in and out of frame, struck out of nowhere, and the triggers were sometimes obvious, and sometimes as obscure as an empty beer bottle left on a motel sink. Poor boys!
In a chapter like this that's mostly setting up what's to come, it's even easier to see how well your pacing works. Each section is cut at just the right point - it's easy to imagine this as some uber-SPN movie (and I still say this story's better than the show!). The tension is building, and I can't wait to see what comes next.
Oh, and Sam & Bobby at the end? Eeep. You're tryin' to break my heart here, aren't you?
No. I am just trying to finish this damn fic. *cries* Help me. Somebody, please, for the love of God, HELP ME. *howls*
I jest, I jest. I love that you feel like it's an uber-SPN movie. Oh, God, I love that like whoa. Thank you so much for that. That makes a Dragons very happy.
I can see why this chapter gave you hell. So much info. I loved Dean's focus here, how he's fighting thru the pain to end this thing for Sam before his time runs out. Oh, Dean.
Sam's right in telling Bobby to have a plan, cause Dean is not gonna be a happy camper about putting Sammy down. Maybe deep down Dean knows Bobby will do the right thing, to save the world and all. Oh, Bobby.
Yes, this chappy was a bitch. And I am soooo glad it is over. Chappy eleven was a fast write, but kind of bitchy too. I think they is all going to be bitches, from here on in. I am resigned to this fact.
*sighs*
Heeeee. Yeah. Don't piss off Dragons Jo. She's got a knee on her. :) Thanks for reading.
Whoa! WTF Jo? Like his body isn't damaged enough, you had to get your licks in too?
Must be a lonely fucking walk out there if you’ve got no faith in the people around you to make the right choices.” You tell him Marcus! I think I like this guy after all.
“I got him, Dean.” Bobby gave him an almost imperceptible nod.
“He’ll try to stop you.” Sam kept his eyes on the road. “Have a plan.” Poor Bobby!
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Made it to LJ.
And now I get to leave copious comments again.
So...
Every week, lady, every frigging week on Friday, you destroy me with the awesomeness of this fic. And this week? No different.
Sam and Bobby's little chit-chat at the end? Destructive to well being.
Dean? (the whole fic!) - Shattered itty bitty pieces of 'poor woobi'.
You? Well - demonspawned writing prowress aside, fabulous plot twisty things and development.
Bring on Friday!
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Welcome to LJ! And um, thanks *blushes*. The Dragons is stoked you're enjoying it.
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Happy Friday back. Thanks for readin', dude. :-)
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In a chapter like this that's mostly setting up what's to come, it's even easier to see how well your pacing works. Each section is cut at just the right point - it's easy to imagine this as some uber-SPN movie (and I still say this story's better than the show!). The tension is building, and I can't wait to see what comes next.
Oh, and Sam & Bobby at the end? Eeep. You're tryin' to break my heart here, aren't you?
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No. I am just trying to finish this damn fic. *cries* Help me. Somebody, please, for the love of God, HELP ME. *howls*
I jest, I jest. I love that you feel like it's an uber-SPN movie. Oh, God, I love that like whoa. Thank you so much for that. That makes a Dragons very happy.
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Sam's right in telling Bobby to have a plan, cause Dean is not gonna be a happy camper about putting Sammy down. Maybe deep down Dean knows Bobby will do the right thing, to save the world and all. Oh, Bobby.
Remind me to never piss off Jo. :-)
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*sighs*
Heeeee. Yeah. Don't piss off Dragons Jo. She's got a knee on her. :) Thanks for reading.
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Must be a lonely fucking walk out there if you’ve got no faith in the people around you to make the right choices.”
You tell him Marcus! I think I like this guy after all.
“I got him, Dean.” Bobby gave him an almost imperceptible nod.
“He’ll try to stop you.” Sam kept his eyes on the road. “Have a plan.”
Poor Bobby!
This chappie rocked! I can't wait for next week!
Thank you,
Alley
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You have no clue how excited those eight little words just made me. You has made me a very happy Dragons right there. :)
Thank you. *smishes you*
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