La LA!! A new chapter of "Blind Spot"! And here's me, waiting on the radiator and floor-repair contractors to show up. Which means I can probably read (or at least make some good progress) on the chapter before I go to work! Yay!!
Consider yourself notified: I plan to read your chapter today.
Yea! I finally caught up with the last two chapters. I am loving this. You've created some great tension and conflict. I love how you start each chapter with this crazy, trippy flashback of Dean's.
I love the internal struggle Dean is going through and Sam trying to get to the root of it. I'm still loving Jo too. I love her banter with Dean. Everyone's voice and characterization is spot-on.
I love the reveal of the "mad cow disease." And the crop circle thing is also cool. I look forward to seeing what you do with that!
Thanks for reading. You know, I am soooo tired this morning, because I was stupid and I stayed up ridiculously late NOT doing the rewrite on Chapter Ten. But when I get up and have comments like this to read, it makes the excruciating tired not so bad.
*hugs you*
Thanks again. I'm really, really glad you're enjoying it. And crop circles? *facepalm* They is so not cool. It's okay, I know.
You know what's nuts? The more a chapter makes me flail, the less I'm able to verbalize teh flale. I'll give it a shot, though.
Oh my god, woman. Every single freaking scene in this chapter had something(s) in it that made my chest constrict, eyes water, heart race, hatred boil. It's just so wonderful, even though what's happening to Dean and Sam (and what they're doing to each other) is tearing my heart to little bits. You know (I know you know) the one that just fucking slayed me, right? Yeah, the stitches coming out. Dean nearly losing it. And then paired with the physical confrontation toward the end. I just...
FLAIL, you know?
How much of a bribe would it take to let me have the next chapter, say, tomorrow? Hmmm? I have some minor bartering tools, though little actual money. C'mon. Think it over. :-)
Dude, there is seriously not a lot in this world I won't do for a bag of caramel buds. And I really wish I was just trying to be funny. But no. Not a lot I won't do. *headdesk*
You know what else? I has woken up this morning and Pippy Gonzalez has SHREDDED a bunch of maps I printed off the internets. Like, of ALL the papers in this room she could have gone to town on, she picks the three I actually wish to look at. BITCH.
And the bit that made ME go *oh DEAN, baby*? "Glock's in the trunk. Bowie's in the drawer next to your bed." I was typing away, and that shit came out of left field and made me go: DEAN. HONEY. Oh, you is KILLING ME. Who is WRITING this unadultered GLOOP, and how can we stop a bitch? *vomits in mouth a little*
\o/ Winchester smackdown FTW! Don't be NERVOUS. We LOVE it when the boys throw down, remember? *pokes Sam with the Dean stick, giggles* See how pissy he gets?
Heeeeeeeeeeeee!
*coughs* Anyhoo, thanks for reading. Glad you liked it. :)
“I think it’s the warehouse. I mean, my hands are tied and I’m messed up and…he won’t cut me loose.” His heel bounced, knee jumping again. “He’s sayin’ something about you comin’ and…” Dean’s voice hitched, and his chest jumped beneath Sam’s fingers.
He lifted the scalpel, froze.
“I’ve forgotten somethin’… or I have to remember somethin’…” Dean got his hand up too late to catch the first salty slip down his cheek. Sam caught it instead, on the back of his forearm, and looked up.
*flails*
Thank you so much for the update and the lovely imagery. It's sinful how much I love a broken up Dean.
Okay, so this is interesting... you has chosen to quote the one section of text that I rewrote a billionty times. And I never got happy with it, so it still makes me CRINGE when I see it.
Huh. Isn't that funny? *shrugs*
And thank YOU for reading. It's not sinful, my love. We is just fangirls at home with our kinks. *nods* That guy you sit next to on the bus? Trust me, you don't wanna know about the freaky shit THAT guy is into...
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Consider yourself notified: I plan to read your chapter today.
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10-4, Ghostrider.
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I love the internal struggle Dean is going through and Sam trying to get to the root of it. I'm still loving Jo too. I love her banter with Dean. Everyone's voice and characterization is spot-on.
I love the reveal of the "mad cow disease." And the crop circle thing is also cool. I look forward to seeing what you do with that!
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Thanks for reading. You know, I am soooo tired this morning, because I was stupid and I stayed up ridiculously late NOT doing the rewrite on Chapter Ten. But when I get up and have comments like this to read, it makes the excruciating tired not so bad.
*hugs you*
Thanks again. I'm really, really glad you're enjoying it. And crop circles? *facepalm* They is so not cool. It's okay, I know.
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Oh my god, woman. Every single freaking scene in this chapter had something(s) in it that made my chest constrict, eyes water, heart race, hatred boil. It's just so wonderful, even though what's happening to Dean and Sam (and what they're doing to each other) is tearing my heart to little bits. You know (I know you know) the one that just fucking slayed me, right? Yeah, the stitches coming out. Dean nearly losing it. And then paired with the physical confrontation toward the end. I just...
FLAIL, you know?
How much of a bribe would it take to let me have the next chapter, say, tomorrow? Hmmm? I have some minor bartering tools, though little actual money. C'mon. Think it over. :-)
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Dude, there is seriously not a lot in this world I won't do for a bag of caramel buds. And I really wish I was just trying to be funny. But no. Not a lot I won't do. *headdesk*
You know what else? I has woken up this morning and Pippy Gonzalez has SHREDDED a bunch of maps I printed off the internets. Like, of ALL the papers in this room she could have gone to town on, she picks the three I actually wish to look at. BITCH.
And the bit that made ME go *oh DEAN, baby*? "Glock's in the trunk. Bowie's in the drawer next to your bed." I was typing away, and that shit came out of left field and made me go: DEAN. HONEY. Oh, you is KILLING ME. Who is WRITING this unadultered GLOOP, and how can we stop a bitch? *vomits in mouth a little*
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\o/ Winchester smackdown FTW! Don't be NERVOUS. We LOVE it when the boys throw down, remember? *pokes Sam with the Dean stick, giggles* See how pissy he gets?
Heeeeeeeeeeeee!
*coughs* Anyhoo, thanks for reading. Glad you liked it. :)
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He lifted the scalpel, froze.
“I’ve forgotten somethin’… or I have to remember somethin’…” Dean got his hand up too late to catch the first salty slip down his cheek. Sam caught it instead, on the back of his forearm, and looked up.
*flails*
Thank you so much for the update and the lovely imagery. It's sinful how much I love a broken up Dean.
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Huh. Isn't that funny? *shrugs*
And thank YOU for reading. It's not sinful, my love. We is just fangirls at home with our kinks. *nods* That guy you sit next to on the bus? Trust me, you don't wanna know about the freaky shit THAT guy is into...
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Luckily the show isn't averse to it either so I have visuals too!
That guy you sit next to on the bus? Trust me, you don't wanna know about the freaky shit THAT guy is into...
I don't? ;)
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