"Christmas Surprises", for linzi20

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Title: Christmas Surprises
Author: To be revealed
Character(s) and/or pairing(s): Michael/Sara, Lincoln Burrows, LJ Burrows
Rating: PG-13
Category: Het, general, romance, fluff, angst, future fic
Requested by: linzi20
Prompts: M/S of course, but also Lincoln and Sara (general)...maybe holiday fic and/or post S4. Bells, peppermint, home. Dude, I want my

Comments

[linzi20]

Hee. I flaied just reading the author's note *g*.

This is so full of love and hope and exactly what I wanted when I asked for a Michael/Sara happy ending. How'd you know I really meant baby!fic??

Thank you so much. You did a great job with all the prompts, and I'm sure it wasn't easy getting into the Christmas mode after our Christmas was over and done with!

*hugs you*

[anonymous]

Aww, that was so good! The conversation between Lincoln and Sara was really nice; I liked how you described their behavior towards each other. There was some real tenderness and affection between those two.

And this killed me: “Say it,” he whispered. “Say it out aloud, please,” he pleaded again in a whisper, his eyes never leaving hers.

Damn, I'm shivering just reading this sentence again! Very sensual and full of love. *happy sigh*

A great read. What a lovely fic!

[anonymous]

Awwwwwwwwwwww. This is just perfect for linzi20, and we get to share in it too! :)

I really like that you had Sara share the news with Lincoln, using him as a sounding board before she told Michael. It's nice to see a trusting, open relationship between the two of them, bound by more than their love of Michael.

[danni18]

Oh the glimmer of a chappy ending. Loved how we got to hear how sara felt...and her talk with Linc, also loved that you showed a much deeper side of him. And then Michael, so in character. ANyway great story

[marap]

Absolutely wonderful! I loved it. ♥