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"Love in the Time of Chaos", for cerebel

Jan 15, 2009 05:50

Title: Love in the Time of Chaos
Author: To be revealed
Rating: NC-17
Category: romance/action, slash
Characters: Alex Mahone/Michael Scofield
Requested by: cerebel
Summary: The story of Alex and Michael, from S2-S3. Alex reflects on the events that brought them together, and thinks about where they are going.
Author's Notes: cerebel requested romance/action ( Read more... )

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Comments 9

anonymous January 16 2009, 01:51:33 UTC

I enjoyed the trip through S2 and S3 via Alex' mind. It was a fascinating journey. :)

"I can't accept comfort. I can't accept anything that will make let down my guard. I just can't."
--I could see Michael saying this, or at least believing it.

It's nice to see someone there to support Michael emotionally (and physically). He really has had to carry a huge burden.

Nice job!

michele659 January 26 2009, 09:12:51 UTC

Thank you so much! I'm very happy you enjoyed it!
Alex is always there for Michael-I think he really does love him (subtext that's almost canon, I say!)
Nobody else really understands the burden on Michael to the degree Alex dces. When he tells Michael he does know what it's like to have everything and everyone depend on you,he really knows firsthand what he's talking about.

darkwriter69 January 22 2009, 08:59:21 UTC

I love a topping Michael too and I believe you wrote this really well. I enjoyed this from Alex's POV, especially the Sona scene's.

michele659 January 26 2009, 09:16:41 UTC

Thank you very much!
I miss SONA-I liked when the focus was on Alex and Michael,without the others around all the time.
I like Michael topping,too. It's funny,because I usually think of Alex that way-but I can see Michael needing to feel Alex,also.
I think it went along with his need to feel Alex was real,it kept Michael connected.

darkwriter69 January 27 2009, 23:10:18 UTC

sometimes I don't understand how so many others don't see Michael as a topping character, but to me he needs to always be in control and he's so manipulative that I find it difficult to see him any other way.

Thanks again for the great read.

jolietjones January 23 2009, 23:02:41 UTC

I enjoyed this fic very much.

michele659 January 26 2009, 09:17:52 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate it!

I also love your icon. Alex is amazing,isn't he? :)

cerebel February 1 2009, 05:36:16 UTC

Hey, I am such total fail - I missed this completely when it was first posted, and I'm so sorry. :(

I love the way you do their communication - how Alex just understands Michael, which is really at the root of their relationship, and why it appeals to me. Also, I really like where you chose to start the physicality in their relationship - I can totally see it happening that way, in terms of their character dynamic.

And top!Michael ♥

Seriously, awesome job. I love it. Thank you so much!

michele659 February 1 2009, 22:47:51 UTC

You're welcome!
Thank you so much for reading and for your comments!,there's no need to be sorry.
I'm so happy you enjoyed it;I was so hoping that you would!
I'm glad you liked the way I had them communicating. I feel on the show you see alot of their unspoken communication and understanding. It's like they are almost telepathic at times :)
I really thought SONA could have been the beginning of them having a real relationship,sexual as well as a love relationship. If the writers had any sense!
Yay for topping!Michael. I can see them alternating if they were in a relationship. They'd both want to feel the other inside him.