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"World Upside-Down", for recycledfaery

Jan 12, 2009 10:11

Title: World Upside-Down
Author: To be revealed
Rating: R (for mention of child death, themes of revenge)
Category: Gen, het
Characters: Alex Mahone, Pam Mahone, mention of Cameron Mahone
Requested by: recycledfaery
Summary: A life is like a string unspooling: the longer it is, the more tangled it becomes.
Author's Note: The prompt used was: After Mahone pushes ( Read more... )

exchange 7

Comments 24

lauratnz January 12 2009, 19:12:41 UTC

Wow. Very powerful piece. Characterization is superb. A fantastic read! Thank you!

lauratnz January 14 2009, 02:32:38 UTC

Thank you so much!

badboy_fangirl January 12 2009, 20:04:18 UTC

Yowsa. So much pain, so much anguish. What a rousing tribute to these two characters, partcularly Pam, who like so many others on PB have been underdeveloped. I love it. Just gorgeous.

badboy_fangirl January 14 2009, 02:33:49 UTC

Yes, Pam has been underdeveloped, and it was fun to try to construct her a bit. Thank you for your words here!

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anonymous January 14 2009, 02:34:15 UTC

Thank you so much!

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anonymous January 14 2009, 02:35:01 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad their desperation was conveyed.

chatty_cat January 12 2009, 22:53:19 UTC

I loved this! It was hard to read, but very good. I really liked how the POVs flowed, through present and past. I also liked how both Mahone's and Pam's POV were used. This is something we don't normally see. Also the exploration into their past was very fitting.

chatty_cat January 14 2009, 02:36:19 UTC

I'm glad the created details about their past worked!