What he had to do.

Mar 17, 2009 23:43

He knew the moment he woke up what he had to do.

Even before it registered that he was staring up at a blank white ceiling, even before he heard the constant, incessant beeping of the machines near his bedside, he knew what he had to do.

The face of the shooter burned into his mind. He knew they’d ask him over and over again who was responsible ( Read more... )

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pbeeslysweater March 18 2009, 14:46:52 UTC
Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it.
Oh Charlie and his messed up headspace. :-)
Thanks for reading and commenting!

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flawsrevenge March 27 2009, 09:31:07 UTC
The sad part is that I finally have time to sit down and read this because I had to call in sick to work today. The happy part is that I finally have time to sit down and read this.

Also, I think you need to change your bio...it says something about gaining a Mr. PBS in August, which, you know, already happened. :-)

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flawsrevenge March 27 2009, 09:42:58 UTC
This really brought back the season 1 progression into crazy Charlie for me (which I likes). The end is like...I am terrified of him, you know? It makes me wonder about that scene in the show, too, how you've gotten it laid out here...the broad daylight bit, which is probably a show reference to having Charlie constantly in the light since he got out of prison...there should be more meta about this show...but the feasibility of it? Now I kind of wonder. But I digress, what I really want to say is that I like the way you write crazy!Charlie. Wonderful. You should be writing me more of that. :-)

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pbeeslysweater March 28 2009, 18:39:22 UTC
God finally you read it! ;-)
Totally here you on the lack of time thing...it's insanity!
Sorry to hear you're sick...hopefully you are feeling better...?
Oh bat-shit crazy Charlie...I love him so much....and yes, am terrified.
I'm glad you liked it...I will write more when I have some freetime...ha! right...like that's gonna happen anytime soon... :-(

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