Comments | pbeeslysweater: Quiet Whispers of this Expectant Earth

pbeeslysweater

Quiet Whispers of this Expectant Earth

Mar 17, 2009 16:54

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thothmes March 18 2009, 04:04:40 UTC

No need to be nervous. You really understand the way that most of what they say is in what they don't say and in how they don't say it. Lovely.

pbeeslysweater March 18 2009, 04:08:15 UTC

Thanks! It really is all about what they say by not saying anything at all isn't it... :-)
Thanks for reading and commenting! I'm glad you liked it!

silerswench March 18 2009, 14:48:04 UTC

That was great, really lovely and understated with a very good grasp on the characters :)

pbeeslysweater March 18 2009, 20:30:54 UTC

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Thanks for commenting!

getcarter1701 March 19 2009, 02:10:53 UTC

This was just lovely!

I loved this line "She knew this was dangerous ground, and they would likely spend weeks avoiding each other as much as possible to make up for it, but in that moment, it was everything she needed." It absolutely sums up their relationship...or lack thereof.

Nicely done!

pbeeslysweater March 19 2009, 14:08:28 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
I have to admit, I have a love/hate relationship with their relationship (or lack thereof). It's so...just...GUH! (in that agonizing and yet wonderful way.) :-)
Thanks for reading and commenting!