What We Sacrifice [3/3]

[catoasapun]

Title: What We Sacrifice [3/3]
Author: catoasapun
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Characters: Sylar, Noah, Mohinder, The Haitian
Rating: R
Warnings: Angst, language, implied character death
Spoilers: Up to and through 3x03, One of Us, One of Them. Certain spoilers are pointedly ignored.
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters. *sigh*
Word Count: 3,231
Summary:

Comments

So sweet...and sad

[ml17]

Aww...I hope there is a part 4. It just emphasizes how great the Mylar relationship is. It's nice that Sylar got his redemption, but in the back of my mind, I'm still hoping for him to find a way back to Momo.

Re: So sweet...and sad

[catoasapun]

Heeee. I don't know about that; part of me says it's a possibility, part of me says "NO! Leave it alone."

It's nice that Sylar got his redemption, but in the back of my mind, I'm still hoping for him to find a way back to Momo.
Honestly? Me too. :(

Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

[maxinegray]

What? What?! WHAT!

BENNET YOU ASS!!

*breaks down into silent tears*

That was beautiful... and so unfair. Poor Sylar...

[catoasapun]

Oh noes! *hands you tissue* Don't break down!

Thank you! I am so happy you thought it was beautiful. Poor Sylar indeed. :(

Thanks for reading, dear!

[aurilly]

Oh no!

Really, your dialogue is masterful here. Sylar remains so strong and yet so tender throughout this. I loved how he wasn't afraid to show his feelings. There's something brash and overly confident about Sylar---even when perhaps he's overcompensating, and I just love how that also transfers into his feelings for another person. I don't think I've seen him written like that very often, and it worked for me like few things have ever worked for me. Awesomely original take!

And I really loved the way you used the Haitian. He had his own opinion, and he was right, pitying Sylar, not wanting to use love against him. I love the Haitian! HATE BENNET!!!!

[catoasapun]

Really, your dialogue is masterful here.
Oh wow, thank you so much for saying so; that makes me ridiculously happy. ^_^

I am so pleased that you thought the way I wrote Sylar worked, I was worried that it may come across as somewhat forced. So glad it worked for you!

Thanks! I felt that adding the Haitian in there as a contrast to Bennet and his vengeful attitude was important, I'm glad you liked him! Damn Bennet!

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such lovely words. ♥

[shimmeree]

YOU SUCK!

(This was beautifully written. I loved each chapter so much. And...)

YOU SUCK!

[catoasapun]

LOL!

I am sooooo sorry, dear! Forgive me! :( *hands cookie*

(I'm glad you liked it! Thank you so much for your sweet words!)

Lo siento!!!

[original_tinks]

*laughs at the comment before mine* I think you made somebody cry.

=P It's so sad and touching and if I hadn't seen shimmeree's comment I might have been cursing your angst as well...lol

Good job. [Follow up maybe? ne? yes yes?]

[catoasapun]

Hahahah! I think so. Oopsies!

LOL! You can curse my angst if you like, I'm just thrilled that it seemed to have the emotional impact I intended. I AM SO glad you found it touching. ^_^

Thank you, sweetie! ♥ [I dunno. Haven't decided yet.]

[original_tinks]

I hope you decide to. It is very good =P
Shouldn't you be...at school? *looks suspicious*...are you skippping?...oh wait, it's sunday.

rofl!

[catoasapun]

We'll see. It's mostly up to my muse, and you know how moody she can be. >_>

HAHAHAHHA! Yeah, it's Sunday. But, I do have work in a few hours. Damn my life.

lol ♥