Comments | pax_morgana: Mordred / Merlin: snippet (edited: 7/20/2011)

pax_morgana

Mordred / Merlin: snippet (edited: 7/20/2011)

Jul 18, 2011 01:45

So, I read a fic on AO3 that inspired me to write this little piece here. It's not finished, but I figured I'd share what I had of it with you folks. Feedback would be lovely~

( Marking the passage of time by Merlin's visits, it has been two thousand three hundred years. )

pov:3rd omniscient, fandom:arthurian, original:random

Comments 8

babydracky July 18 2011, 06:20:35 UTC

Really interesting.
This prison is so very worst than death for Mordred... Poor little thing. What will happen to him when Merlin forgets about him?

pax_morgana July 18 2011, 06:50:02 UTC

Mayhap we'll find out! Thanks for the comment. <3

amaranthine_7 July 18 2011, 09:19:41 UTC

This is very intriguing.
I like the setting of the scene and the idea of the prison. I hope you'll post more of this text in the future :D It sounds really good.

allis

pax_morgana July 19 2011, 00:24:07 UTC

Thanks, love! I did add a little bit to the end. Not much, but some.

amaranthine_7 July 19 2011, 20:33:12 UTC

I really enjoyed reading what you added :D
The idea of your story is really gripping and interesting to read.

pax_morgana July 20 2011, 01:13:27 UTC

Heee, thank you! I'm not quite sure where I want to take it, though. I'll have to think about it a bit.

messiah_noire July 18 2011, 23:05:56 UTC

This is heart-breaking. Poor Mordred, this certainly is a fate worse than death. :(
Yet, wonderfully written! <3

pax_morgana July 19 2011, 00:22:20 UTC

Aww, thank you. <3 I added a little bit more. It's not over, by a longshot, I don't think.