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The first-born of our first-born Part 12

Jan 12, 2010 22:36

Title: The first-born of our first-born.

Author:pawshingo

Pairings: Yoochun/Changmin

Rating: G

Genre: AU

Disclaimer: I don’t own DBSK, SJ though it would be nice if I did….

Summary: Best friends, Park Hyo Bin and Shim Jiwon made a promise to each other before retiring from the army. Park Hyo Bin’s first-born of his first-born, his first child’s child will marry ( Read more... )

first- born, yoochun/changmin

Comments 25

sinkingstone79 January 12 2010, 14:49:07 UTC

oh bb i didn't think you would update part 12 this soon. ok go bk to read. tks

pawshingo January 12 2010, 14:54:18 UTC

Hehehe! Had some time on my hands....

sinkingstone79 January 12 2010, 14:56:06 UTC

haha yoochun not yet gave up. the story is getting better. tks

pawshingo January 12 2010, 23:19:56 UTC

Thanks! I was struggling a bit here! Yoochun will never give up! LOL!

yesungx3 January 12 2010, 15:25:02 UTC

*waves*

I'm a new reader XD Just read all the chapters in one go. I will back track and comment on the other chapters after I come home from school. Was about to leave but then this fic caught my attention *-*

I love a clingy Yoochun :DD And ugh WHAT'S WRONG WITH CHANGMIN >.< I think he should be tortured just a bit XD but he's already starting to realize he likes Yoochun, well not really but we can all see it XD

This fic is great! Can't wait to read the next chapter! <3

pawshingo January 12 2010, 15:39:51 UTC

Thank you! A new reader too! Yay!!!! *waves back* Clingy Yoochun's the best! Changmin? He will get sorted out soon. Please do comment, feedback is always good!

chloe1910 January 12 2010, 16:16:08 UTC

Hwaiting Yoochun ah! We support you. Show that husband of yours that you are indeed very desirable and he's blind for not realising your worth. I hope you'll give that Shim Changin some competitor for Yoochun's affection. Sometimes, it takes one to almost lose something one has in order to realise it's worth..

pawshingo January 12 2010, 23:09:22 UTC

Yoochun: *smiles bravely* Thank you so much! Your words are really inspiring! I don't want to be mean (part of my new strategy) to my Minnie but what you said is true. I hope he realizes it too!

gompi January 12 2010, 21:50:39 UTC

i can't say no

not to Chunnie~~

pawshingo January 12 2010, 23:10:14 UTC

Who can? No one! LOL!

gompi January 13 2010, 01:10:24 UTC

if anyone can

it's not me XD